freestyle, write anything don't stop to think

[Achtung_Bebe]

sitting in this dark empty room
where I can sense the essence of gloom
hearing nothing but the whir of a world yet to pause
I the only being in the still
If this doesnt' cause me to reflect
Then nothing will.

Hearing christmas bells chime in
Is it really time for the holiday to begin.
I suppose it is
Wouldn't you know...
It seems as though the joy was a no go.

I scratch my head,
Rid it of all disease,
Look up at the light far above,
In hopes to fight off the urge to sneeze,
It's the typical night; shades of boring degrees.

 

[Achtung_Bebe]

haha it's funny because you don't exactly know what you just posted until you go back to re-read it. I enjoy this stream of consciousness stuff. Keep it coming guys.

 

[ACROB@T]

Ripped open by a vampires wing
Shrouded in doubt above a churchs shadow
Spun into the heavens on a rollercoaster directed to hell
Fearful for icey cold waves of encrusted steel

Pushed down to the ground
Speared up to the a veil coloured on pink silk vine
Twisted through a circle of cobwebs
I dine on a feast of earth

 

[ACROB@T]

lol, creepy stuff, I just flicked through loads of TV channels and wrote the first image I could think of in relation to what I was watchting..its very difficult to be as unpredictable as possible..the second you stop you think of what to write next so you just need a bit of self restraint in blanking out where this messy peice is going

 

[ACROB@T]

and yes The Lost Boys did feature somewhere

 

[Bonochick]

Raining blood
Clouds bursting
To cover me
With joy
Slip on down
Say hello
And share that smile
That I need to see

 

[baker6621]

confused
--------

(poem "freestyle", no stopping or thinking so it might suck)

the world is in pain
our heart aches
how are staying sane?
our heart brakes


tears, they come at night
we are hit hard everyday
we cannot lose this fight
listen to everything i say

love can save us, love is our hope
we can make it if we bond
family will help us cope
and so will the beautiful pond

i'm going away
i ain't here to stay
life has been tough,
well we had it rough

people are dying
people are crying
they're calling our names
we just look, and turn away

we have the better life
better people, better homes
they don't even have a knife
while we sit together in smoke

i leave you here today
nothing else to say
life is good and will always be
look at africa and you will see

we love you, do we mean it?
we hate you, don't you see it?

 

[baker6621]

reading it now, it doesn't really make sense. write your own freestyle like that though, it's where it comes out, people fuck things up when they think about it for ours, this is where the truth lies...

i'll do another later, this time listening to u2.

 

[baker6621]

keep coming! i'll try one more when i finish Hw. thanks guys, this is pretty cool.

 

[wannabe]

peanut butter captain crunch
back the way it was
from the razors almighty

 

[foray]

Originally posted by Bonochick:
Raining blood
Clouds bursting
To cover me
With joy
Slip on down
Say hello
And share that smile
That I need to see

You're a happier person than you give yourself credit for

foray

 

[foray]

the sky is forever
blues so deep we immerse in the light
oh solace in a cask of wine
or in a friend's hand
I wish I could give you forever

 

[Ana]

Sitting in this cold room
listening to Led Zeppelin's stairway to heaven
I ask to myself:
Is there really heaven?
It makes me wonder...
And then Robert Plant tells me my stairway lies on the whispering wind

let's post this so I can read it hmmm

 

[Bonochick]

Originally posted by foray:

You're a happier person than you give yourself credit for

foray

I've been changing for the better lately.

------------------
"I don't know you,
But you don't know the half of it..."

 

[ultraviolet299]

Sorrow, one pace away
Step closer to me
Tears, streaming down a cheek
Come closer to me
Want to break through
Want to be set free
Not time to be bound in chains
While the world goes by
Day after day

Want to see the truth
Want to feel the meaning
Meaning of all this?

Step closer
Don?t cry
Be strong
Hold on

 

[baker6621]

very very good..interesting and deep.

 

[The Wanderer]

her hair is a flame
her touch is a torch
--for lovers' light

her insides burn for love
and the feel of darkness
--that it sometimes brings

fading like a broken moon
in the harvest you wilt
--as she is sprawled over you in rays

 

[foray]

in the harvest you wilt
--as she is sprawled over you in rays


Hey those are pretty good lines.


foray

 

[The Wanderer]

yeah, the first 6 basically suck ass, I guess it takes a few lines to get warmed up

 

[ultraviolet299]

It's all over
And the lights are turned off
No thought in the moment
Just thoughts in flight
Take off your shirt
Don?t need to ask twice
We shall seep though this moment
And crawl though the night
And crawl though the night
No need to ask twice
Just turn it off
The light

 

[zooropamanda]

gaze and blast
suck through stones
of crystalised memories
upon a beaten back
far away from a nightime reverie
unleashed under the suffering silences
of my bitter darkly lit spaces

you
beautiful soul
drenched with the moment's gaze
inriched in my mellow song
shaken spirits dancing under one shallowed moon
carved out by our entwined hands
together follow a shadow from before

for the first time
you're my forever

 

[zooropamanda]

no editing right?
so that should read 'enriched'

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

feel deep pain
the lovers room
share no sorrow
anymore
feel your breath
nestle my skin
ache so deep
it turns my skin
highways hope
free to dream
beauty reigns
inside your shadow
conciousness buries
light we feed from
in the sky
your shallow wake
leaves me scarred

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

God I suck.

Bonochicky, glad to see you're getting better girl.

------------------
Angel in devil's shoes
Salvation in the blues

~*April*~

 

[Ana]

Torn apart completely
you went away without saying goodbye
but why?
I've gave you the best in me
you don't understand what real love means

I'm standing here
tormented by the loneliness
my wounds are still bleeding
and my heart is full of bitterness

You went away
you're not coming back

 

[zooropamanda]

shoot em down
till the cant breathe no more
mess with their heads
and laugh a high cackle at their
bitterness
patheticness deserves to be stepped
on
make sure u rip their hearts out
and stamp them into the ground
with the force of a thousand
stones from the sea
weakness is your virtue, miss
you should be so proud
Smile little girl
Smile, you always frown

 

[Achtung_Bebe]

addicted to
the love
you brought
has left
me in
a state
unthought
so here
I sit
and pause
to think
I find
myself
offering you
a wink
But you're
not here
to give
its return
and my heart
it beats
It yearns
It burns...

 

[EdgeVox]

sincerely
naively
stupidly
confiding
am hiding
slip sliding
down my ego
thin armor
withdrawing
bleeding
nothing
clenched fist
fake smile
unanimous frustration
insurrection
name is good intention
revolution
meet insecurity
sighing pledge of allegiance
indifferent lethargy
meet day old inspiration
slight redemption
awkward smile
kismet fuck
I miss you already
though you're right here
slighted luck
plucked out of existance

 

[EdgeVox]

Security with a wink
Seduction out of my mind
Listlessly
Hopelessly
Infatuated
Out of my hands
Jump into my arms
It's a surprise
Laugh off the fear
I thought you were in control
Pariah in my soul
Sleeping through the day
Alive at sundown
Soul in breaking skin

 

[wannabe]

And I've thought lately
I need to write
Like I have to spill emotion
Or I have to strangle ideas
All I know is I am content
And I can see the different sides

*yekk, I can't write today, hehe*