fleeting moments

[Angela Harlem]

these fleeting moments
dance right by
and can i catch one for you?
turn it to sun,
to dry up the rain
that is your tears.
tears you cry
for what you cannot have
can i catch one for you?

no, i can't catch one.
i catch you a dandelion!
will you think of the sun?
and the rain will be gone
on your horizon
at least,
for a fleeting moment.

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"I think, therefore I um..."

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

That fits the mood, Angie. I like it.



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My scream got lost in a paper cup...

 

[foray]

and the rain will be gone
on your horizon
at least,

Yes.

 

[zooropamanda]

BG pointed out the exact lines that made me smile.

I loved it Angie.
Please share more with us.

 

[ACROB@T]

love it angie

and can i catch one for you?
turn it to sun,
to dry up the rain
that is your tears

 

[BabyGrace]

Angela!!

no, i can't catch one.
i catch you a dandelion!
will you think of the sun?
and the rain will be gone

I love that part, this has the feel of a very loving poem, positive too (which I like)..
glad to see you here!

 

[Angela Harlem]

Aww thankyou guys. You are all kind. I'd post here more often but I feel silly doing it. I just like to play around with words and stuff, its not really poetry.

 

[u2er]

wow, that was great!

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"Everyone argues, then we do what I say" -Bono

 

[Blue_Angel]

I love this poem Angelina. for whoever you wrote it, it is so pretty

 

[foray]

no, i can't catch one.
i catch you a dandelion!
will you think of the sun?
and the rain will be gone
on your horizon
at least,
for a fleeting moment.

That's so beautifully innocent and loving. Makes me miss my sisters. or. something.


foray

 

[The Wanderer]

i catch you a dandelion!
will you think of the sun?

this is a line that I absolutely I love!

 

[ghetofabu]

turn it to sun,
to dry up the rain

I like this line.