First Time Here....Be Nice - Page 3

EdgeVox · 10-17-2001, 03:56 AM

Is infatuation really a bad thing?
Am I trite for indulging in a triviality?
I look at you from far away and marvel,
I hear your laugh and act as if I knew what you were laughing at,
I can't get you out of my mind,
Like a lingering smile lost in a mind full of troubles,
Sincerity, both curse and blessing,
Listless and waning in a corrupt world,
Yet fierce in times of hypocrisy,
Doubt, like my subconscious' shadow,
I thought it'd be easier,
It's not like this in the movies,
Where's my last minute plot twist?
Where's my kiss in the rain?
Where's my fucking happy ending?...

Achtung_Bebe · 10-17-2001, 03:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:
Is infatuation really a bad thing?
Am I trite for indulging in a triviality?
I look at you from far away and marvel,
I hear your laugh and act as if I knew what you were laughing at,
I can't get you out of my mind,
Like a lingering smile lost in a mind full of troubles,

This whole thing is gorgeous... and it's like you read my mind.

Quote:

It's not like this in the movies,
Where's my last minute plot twist?
Where's my kiss in the rain?
Where's my fucking happy ending?...

The ending lines are brilliant.

~#1 fan

EdgeVox · 10-19-2001, 02:58 AM

If there's anything a child never dreams of,
It's to be a fucking hypocrite,
Which makes you wonder..
What could've possibly have gone wrong for more than half the people on this planet,
I'm not cynical...I'm just pissed
Misunderstood, Abortion, Parenthood
Where's my state of grace
I miss my faith
My profound love for you more than makes up for it,
If it weren't for you
I'd be dead, in spirit in faith
You're my glory
My light
I'd die to make things right
I'll always be true
For a smile I'd trade my soul
I'm not sure I believe in god,
But I'm damned sure that I believe in love
Love, such a cliched word nowadays
It's sucha great feeling when you say it,
And truly feel it
See my sorrows burn
Set my spirit free
Take my hand
Know that I'll never let you go
Know that I'll die before I let any harm befall you,
All is well.....
I'm a terrible liar

EdgeVox · 10-19-2001, 03:13 AM

I meant well
I wanted love
I was at your mercy
Needless to say
You thought otherwise
You made yourself clear
Crystal,
Shrapnel in my eyes
Can't see through the pain
Closing them means less hurt
My eyes are wide open
Pain for truth
Don't know who I'm kissing anymore
I think I'm with you out of pure nostalgia
The sharpest blade resides in scorn
Sincerity the weakest armor
I can't justify my sadness
I can't justify my stupidity
I can justify my loyalty
She's not listening...
Maybe she never was

EdgeVox · 10-19-2001, 03:26 AM

everything's broken

Achtung_Bebe · 10-22-2001, 03:27 AM

You have amazed your #1 fan once again.

~#1 fan

EdgeVox · 11-02-2001, 02:34 AM

Have you ever reached a point where you realize it's all downhill from then on,
It's like getting to the top of a rollercoaster..and thinking it can't get any better than this....

EdgeVox · 11-16-2001, 03:00 AM

I dream in technicolor
Though I live in black and white,
Persecuted in my mind
Paranoid by choice
Delusionally romantic
Slip on down my mirage
Conclusively transparent
Making love in a glass room
Stripped of sight
The only truth is passion
Desperate tongue
Seeking affliction
Are you as fucked up as I am?
Meet me at the halfway point of sanity

EdgeVox · 11-16-2001, 03:21 AM

sincerely
naively
stupidly
confiding
am hiding
slip sliding
down my ego
thin armor
withdrawing
bleeding
nothing
clenched fist
fake smile
unanimous frustration
insurrection
name is good intention
revolution
meet insecurity
sighing pledge of allegiance
indifferent lethargy
meet day old inspiration
slight redemption
awkward smile
kismet fuck
I miss you already
though you're right here
slighted luck
plucked out of existance

EdgeVox · 11-16-2001, 03:22 AM

Security with a wink
Seduction out of my mind
Listlessly
Hopelessly
Infatuated
Out of my hands
Jump into my arms
It's a surprise
Laugh off the fear
I thought you were in control
Pariah in my soul
Sleeping through the day
Alive at sundown
Soul in breaking skin

Achtung_Bebe · 11-16-2001, 03:26 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:
Jump into my arms
It's a surprise

I love surprises!

...almost as much as I love your stuff!

Seriously, glad to see this back on top (however it is no longer your first time here...)

~#1 fan

EdgeVox · 11-16-2001, 04:36 AM

Reluctantly forgiving you
Translucent eyes never lie
As clear as the night sky
I'm so jealous that you have a life without me
I know that's not healthy, fuck it
Wish things were different
Wish you were here
Hope you feel the same
Would you mind breathing the same air as me
Put up with me for just a little bit
I live day by day
Stay with me
At least get me through the night...

BabyGrace · 11-16-2001, 08:56 PM

EdgeVox, you have some brilliant stuff here..

why don't you move out of this place into a new thread?

------------------
but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

EdgeVox · 11-17-2001, 06:39 AM

Babygrace? you think so?...I'm extremely flattered....I chose to stay in the same thread so I could continue to trace my so-called poetic progress.....I really appreciate you saying it's good, cuz I had gotten used to not receiving any input....I really appreciate it

brettig · 11-17-2001, 06:59 AM

Ok...ill withdraw that past comment i made that may have irked u, but seriously, this thread on its own is a fine body of work...hard hitting, honest and entertaining.

keep it going! *uses the sunnies smiley in your honour*

EdgeVox · 12-01-2001, 04:55 AM

Enlightenment,
Slipping through my drunken fingers,
Come along through my canyons of false wisdom,
Burgeouning isles of maturity,
Love, the last great myth,
On desperate horseback,
Through rain soacked peninsulas of doubt,
I'd settle for diamond-covered promises,
To ease my aching optimism,
Kiss my sky, Gasping for truth
I miss your security,
Your lips of reassurance,
Renaissance in fucking,
Born anew,
Newborn babe, drenched in faith,
Jesus don't steer me wrong,
Don't lose faith in Me,
I'm worth your time,
I'm worth your time.....

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 12-01-2001).]

EdgeVox · 12-01-2001, 07:37 AM

Slipping and sliding,
injustice, spoken through corneas,
Tear ducts leak truth,
Slaves upon eye contact,
Envious souls....
Blink and hide your truth,
Sunrise, bears your true intentions,
I'll always love no matter the distance,
No matter the blind optimism,
I miss you.....

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 12-01-2001).]

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 12-01-2001).]

BabyGrace · 12-01-2001, 06:07 PM

yes, i said so cos I think so

that's actually a cool idea, tracing your ideas like that...you can look back and watch the way your thinking changed..

just cos we're not responding doesnt mean we're not reading
so anyway, keep writing, i really like the truth and honesty of your words

bono-vox · 12-01-2001, 06:20 PM

Edge Vox its Bono Vox, I really love your stuff, you are truly amazing.

Your other Number one fan, you dont mind sharing that spot Achtung_Bebe?

------------------

Achtung_Bebe · 12-05-2001, 01:34 AM

ofcourse not bono-vox, that position is meant to be shared... sooner or later EdgeVox will monopolize and we'll all be #1 fans

great stuff babe

10-17-2001, 03:56 AM	#41
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Is infatuation really a bad thing? Am I trite for indulging in a triviality? I look at you from far away and marvel, I hear your laugh and act as if I knew what you were laughing at, I can't get you out of my mind, Like a lingering smile lost in a mind full of troubles, Sincerity, both curse and blessing, Listless and waning in a corrupt world, Yet fierce in times of hypocrisy, Doubt, like my subconscious' shadow, I thought it'd be easier, It's not like this in the movies, Where's my last minute plot twist? Where's my kiss in the rain? Where's my fucking happy ending?... __________________

12-05-2001, 01:34 AM	#60
Achtung_Bebe New Yorker Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Beneath the noise, below the din Posts: 2,859 Local Time: 05:35 PM	ofcourse not bono-vox, that position is meant to be shared... sooner or later EdgeVox will monopolize and we'll all be #1 fans great stuff babe __________________

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10-19-2001, 02:58 AM	#43
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	If there's anything a child never dreams of, It's to be a fucking hypocrite, Which makes you wonder.. What could've possibly have gone wrong for more than half the people on this planet, I'm not cynical...I'm just pissed Misunderstood, Abortion, Parenthood Where's my state of grace I miss my faith My profound love for you more than makes up for it, If it weren't for you I'd be dead, in spirit in faith You're my glory My light I'd die to make things right I'll always be true For a smile I'd trade my soul I'm not sure I believe in god, But I'm damned sure that I believe in love Love, such a cliched word nowadays It's sucha great feeling when you say it, And truly feel it See my sorrows burn Set my spirit free Take my hand Know that I'll never let you go Know that I'll die before I let any harm befall you, All is well..... I'm a terrible liar

10-19-2001, 03:13 AM	#44
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	I meant well I wanted love I was at your mercy Needless to say You thought otherwise You made yourself clear Crystal, Shrapnel in my eyes Can't see through the pain Closing them means less hurt My eyes are wide open Pain for truth Don't know who I'm kissing anymore I think I'm with you out of pure nostalgia The sharpest blade resides in scorn Sincerity the weakest armor I can't justify my sadness I can't justify my stupidity I can justify my loyalty She's not listening... Maybe she never was

10-19-2001, 03:26 AM	#45
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	everything's broken

10-22-2001, 03:27 AM	#46
Achtung_Bebe New Yorker Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Beneath the noise, below the din Posts: 2,859 Local Time: 05:35 PM	You have amazed your #1 fan once again. ~#1 fan

11-02-2001, 02:34 AM	#47
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Have you ever reached a point where you realize it's all downhill from then on, It's like getting to the top of a rollercoaster..and thinking it can't get any better than this....

11-16-2001, 03:00 AM	#48
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	I dream in technicolor Though I live in black and white, Persecuted in my mind Paranoid by choice Delusionally romantic Slip on down my mirage Conclusively transparent Making love in a glass room Stripped of sight The only truth is passion Desperate tongue Seeking affliction Are you as fucked up as I am? Meet me at the halfway point of sanity

11-16-2001, 03:21 AM	#49
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	sincerely naively stupidly confiding am hiding slip sliding down my ego thin armor withdrawing bleeding nothing clenched fist fake smile unanimous frustration insurrection name is good intention revolution meet insecurity sighing pledge of allegiance indifferent lethargy meet day old inspiration slight redemption awkward smile kismet fuck I miss you already though you're right here slighted luck plucked out of existance

11-16-2001, 03:22 AM	#50
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Security with a wink Seduction out of my mind Listlessly Hopelessly Infatuated Out of my hands Jump into my arms It's a surprise Laugh off the fear I thought you were in control Pariah in my soul Sleeping through the day Alive at sundown Soul in breaking skin

11-16-2001, 04:36 AM	#52
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Reluctantly forgiving you Translucent eyes never lie As clear as the night sky I'm so jealous that you have a life without me I know that's not healthy, fuck it Wish things were different Wish you were here Hope you feel the same Would you mind breathing the same air as me Put up with me for just a little bit I live day by day Stay with me At least get me through the night...

11-16-2001, 08:56 PM	#53
BabyGrace Refugee Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: even NJ loves NY Posts: 2,095 Local Time: 06:35 PM	EdgeVox, you have some brilliant stuff here.. why don't you move out of this place into a new thread? ------------------ but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

11-17-2001, 06:39 AM	#54
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Babygrace? you think so?...I'm extremely flattered....I chose to stay in the same thread so I could continue to trace my so-called poetic progress.....I really appreciate you saying it's good, cuz I had gotten used to not receiving any input....I really appreciate it

11-17-2001, 06:59 AM	#55
brettig New Yorker Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: heehee, ask george Posts: 3,194 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Ok...ill withdraw that past comment i made that may have irked u, but seriously, this thread on its own is a fine body of work...hard hitting, honest and entertaining. keep it going! uses the sunnies smiley in your honour

12-01-2001, 04:55 AM	#56
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Enlightenment, Slipping through my drunken fingers, Come along through my canyons of false wisdom, Burgeouning isles of maturity, Love, the last great myth, On desperate horseback, Through rain soacked peninsulas of doubt, I'd settle for diamond-covered promises, To ease my aching optimism, Kiss my sky, Gasping for truth I miss your security, Your lips of reassurance, Renaissance in fucking, Born anew, Newborn babe, drenched in faith, Jesus don't steer me wrong, Don't lose faith in Me, I'm worth your time, I'm worth your time..... [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 12-01-2001).]

12-01-2001, 07:37 AM	#57
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:35 PM	Slipping and sliding, injustice, spoken through corneas, Tear ducts leak truth, Slaves upon eye contact, Envious souls.... Blink and hide your truth, Sunrise, bears your true intentions, I'll always love no matter the distance, No matter the blind optimism, I miss you..... [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 12-01-2001).] [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 12-01-2001).]

12-01-2001, 06:07 PM	#58
BabyGrace Refugee Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: even NJ loves NY Posts: 2,095 Local Time: 06:35 PM	yes, i said so cos I think so that's actually a cool idea, tracing your ideas like that...you can look back and watch the way your thinking changed.. just cos we're not responding doesnt mean we're not reading so anyway, keep writing, i really like the truth and honesty of your words

12-01-2001, 06:20 PM	#59
bono-vox Rock n' Roll Doggie Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: maze of your imagination, where the streets have no name, lol Posts: 3,436 Local Time: 09:35 AM	Edge Vox its Bono Vox, I really love your stuff, you are truly amazing. Your other Number one fan, you dont mind sharing that spot Achtung_Bebe? ------------------