First Time Here....Be Nice - Page 2

Bacchus · 05-25-2001, 03:05 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:

I'd trade my eyes for circumstance
Please dawn on my lips
You trade my nightmares for anecdotes

Indifference is the enemy of passion
...

this is one of your best EdgeVox, so much raw emotion is hard to capture within poetry... yet i must say you do it with ease; your words speak of a noise rarely heard with these infant ears. Thank you for opening up so much SOUL@@

...always remember, silence must be heard...

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The heart that is soonest awake to the flowers is always the first to be touched by the thorns.
Thomas Moore, 1779�1852

EdgeVox · 05-25-2001, 03:26 AM

Would you notice my absence
Would you feel incomplete
Is there nothing redeemable in my life
So much hurt

Spin in my grave
anonymity by trade
Soothe my fears
Drink my pain
I wish I could give in return

Let's fuck our troubles away
You know I'm good for it..

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 05-25-2001).]

voxxie · 05-25-2001, 04:00 AM

nice!!!

i wish that i could write so long poems even in spanish

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

Bacchus · 05-25-2001, 05:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:

Let's fuck our troubles away
You know I'm good for it..
{05-25-2001}.]

couln't have said it better myself, oh, wait;i thought i did... maybe it was just one of 'em things that burn the wire through the radio waves... thankz againj

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The heart that is soonest awake to the flowers is always the first to be touched by the thorns.
Thomas Moore, 1779�1852

zooropamanda · 05-27-2001, 07:13 AM

hey edgevox...

you are allowed to open another thread to post your stuff!

its ok, we'll let ya!!

these have all been so very honest
i love honest poetry

popkidu2 · 05-27-2001, 08:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:
mediocrity...if that's the case...

Through a Cell phone I hear you crying
you know I'm still trying- to get a fix on things

It's You and Me and World War Three
You know and I know how it's going to be- we'll lose out in the end

Remember when you told me everything would turn out right
I didn't know I'd have to put up such a fight- to find my way back to the middle

Quote:

I need you to overlook my cons,
Which surely outweigh the pros
I need to know that you won't let me go,
I need to know that you won't leave me for a better man,
I'll be worth it, I know I can try to make you happy,
Will good laughs ever compensate for happiness
My soul in exchange for patience, not an even trade by far,
I need you to fight on my side in this war for my selfishness

It's You and Me and World War Three,
pick a side, wherever you'll be, you'll see me,
Shooting at me, both sides lose, but you'll be free
Free from my mediocrity, maybe that was the plan all along.....

EdgeVox · 05-29-2001, 12:52 PM

I hate having to look at that first post I did....emphasizing it only makes it worse

EdgeVox · 06-13-2001, 03:11 AM

Loved you in that memory
When you tried to stay awake
Couldn't get up if I tried
Put your ears to the ground,
you'll hear me running from my troubles
I can't hold you anymore
You're lost to me, Another name in a morbid history book
Wish it was last year
Got no reason to smile at another sunrise
You'd best leave me in my selfishness
fuck I don't know

EdgeVox · 06-17-2001, 06:35 AM

You're made for my lips
You're built for my soul
The only one that could stand me
I love you
I need you
Without you I'd cut my scarlet ropes

My identity and life depend on your disposition,
A kiss to you is a formality, to me it's a necessity,
My love is an unconscious infinity....
You'll never be alone

[This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 06-17-2001).]

zooropamanda · 06-17-2001, 10:12 PM

I like this one Edgevox..

EdgeVox · 08-03-2001, 05:25 AM

My spirit feels like ash
Blow me a kiss and I'll disintegrate
I'd give anything to know what you're thinking,
To know how you really feel about me,
Do you really think I'm going to pull through?
How much faith are you prepared to lose?
God I wish I'd never known you..
I was much more comfortable being miserable
I'm so fucking disillusioned with my life...
I hope it get's better...it fucking better..

zooropamanda · 08-03-2001, 09:42 AM

you have a very raw style edgevox

very open and honest..I like it

Achtung_Bebe · 08-05-2001, 04:20 AM

Hey EdgeVox your stuff is really bare and soul searching--I'm your number one fan

Seriously I like it put this stuff together and I guess you've gotten yourself inside the mind of EdgeVox hehe

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"If I am close to the music, and you are close to the music, we are close to each other." -Bono

Achtung_Bebe · 09-26-2001, 08:52 PM

I thought it was time I brought the rawest thread back to the top

EdgeVox, did you ever get my reply??? I sent it two times now, and if you still haven't, then I may need to break stuff.

BTW, got anything more to write?

EdgeVox · 10-02-2001, 05:28 AM

I bet it gives you a thrill to make me cry,
You do it just to see if you can
I never thought you'd turn on me
I knew everyone else would...but not you
You're lost to me
Even if I wanted to forgive you...
A slave to my self-doubt and paranoia
My dedication to my flaws equaled only by my love for you
Should I have seen it coming?
You're lost to me
I wish things were different
Fuck my stubborn pride
Did it matter that I got along with your family?
This is so stupid....You're so stupid......I'm so fucking stupid.

EdgeVox · 10-04-2001, 03:31 AM

I miss you
I need you
I question you
I hate you
I seethe
I control you
I love you
I fear you
I made you
I touch you
I cared
I lied too
I killed you
I bleed you
I breathe you
I kiss you
I wake you
I will do
I need to
endure you
I fuck you
I think you
I am you

Achtung_Bebe · 10-06-2001, 04:38 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:
I miss you
I need you
I question you
I hate you
I seethe
I control you
I love you
I fear you
I made you
I touch you
I cared
I lied too
I killed you
I bleed you
I breathe you
I kiss you
I wake you
I will do
I need to
endure you
I fuck you
I think you
I am you

EdgeVox, This is very good! I knew you wouldn't let us down with another piece of your soul--please write more nonsensical bits of poetry in the future

~your #1 fan

EdgeVox · 10-06-2001, 05:14 AM

Grind my teeth
Hold my hand
Cross my fingers
Hope for the best
I wish you only love
If you find someone better
Eyes in exchange for jealousy
I'll never forget you
I'll always be there

EdgeVox · 10-07-2001, 07:24 AM

it's always a joy to hear your voice
voice full of regret
I'm endlessly apologetic
I never meant to hurt you
Support is lost in the transmission
Jealousy took it's place all too easily
You're my pillar of faith
My darling, my church
I don't have God in my life
You're my religion
I believe in you
Nothing can ever fill the hole in my heart
It's only whole when you're by my side
It's you and I versus the world
My candle in a time of darkness
The light struggling against the all too familiar blackness
The only way is through you
Please allow safe passage
Through your good intentions
I love you
Is that no longer enough
Like a piece of broken glass
Your absence pierces my soul
I mean you the best
I intend only good
You'll never find the foundation of my sorrow
Life without you is no life at all
Your optismism is contagious
Like a plague only heaven-sent
In dreams, we kiss eternally
In life I hurt you
Without your love,
I'm colorblind
I need you to see
To see the rainbow of life at my disposition
I wish you the best......I wish you fortune
I hope I can still make you smile
You're everything to me
A bed without your presence
I need you to make it sacred
Our altar of hope
What you touch becomes light
I'd follow you and protect you
All you'd need is ask.......

Achtung_Bebe · 10-12-2001, 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EdgeVox:

You'll never find the foundation of my sorrow
Life without you is no life at all
Your optismism is contagious
Like a plague only heaven-sent

Wow I love this last one you posted EdgeVox. This bit right here stood out to me... I love the line "Like a plague only heaven-sent". You're a true poet!

~#1 fan

05-25-2001, 03:26 AM	#22
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	Would you notice my absence Would you feel incomplete Is there nothing redeemable in my life So much hurt Spin in my grave anonymity by trade Soothe my fears Drink my pain I wish I could give in return Let's fuck our troubles away You know I'm good for it.. [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 05-25-2001).] __________________

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05-25-2001, 04:00 AM	#23
voxxie The Fly Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: round there Posts: 133 Local Time: 05:18 PM	nice!!! i wish that i could write so long poems even in spanish ------------------ a mexican poet, but not a very good one

05-27-2001, 07:13 AM	#25
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 09:18 AM	hey edgevox... you are allowed to open another thread to post your stuff! its ok, we'll let ya!! these have all been so very honest i love honest poetry

05-29-2001, 12:52 PM	#27
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	I hate having to look at that first post I did....emphasizing it only makes it worse

06-13-2001, 03:11 AM	#28
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	Loved you in that memory When you tried to stay awake Couldn't get up if I tried Put your ears to the ground, you'll hear me running from my troubles I can't hold you anymore You're lost to me, Another name in a morbid history book Wish it was last year Got no reason to smile at another sunrise You'd best leave me in my selfishness fuck I don't know

06-17-2001, 06:35 AM	#29
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	You're made for my lips You're built for my soul The only one that could stand me I love you I need you Without you I'd cut my scarlet ropes My identity and life depend on your disposition, A kiss to you is a formality, to me it's a necessity, My love is an unconscious infinity.... You'll never be alone [This message has been edited by EdgeVox (edited 06-17-2001).]

06-17-2001, 10:12 PM	#30
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 09:18 AM	I like this one Edgevox..

08-03-2001, 05:25 AM	#31
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	My spirit feels like ash Blow me a kiss and I'll disintegrate I'd give anything to know what you're thinking, To know how you really feel about me, Do you really think I'm going to pull through? How much faith are you prepared to lose? God I wish I'd never known you.. I was much more comfortable being miserable I'm so fucking disillusioned with my life... I hope it get's better...it fucking better..

08-03-2001, 09:42 AM	#32
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 09:18 AM	you have a very raw style edgevox very open and honest..I like it

08-05-2001, 04:20 AM	#33
Achtung_Bebe New Yorker Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Beneath the noise, below the din Posts: 2,859 Local Time: 05:18 PM	Hey EdgeVox your stuff is really bare and soul searching--I'm your number one fan Seriously I like it put this stuff together and I guess you've gotten yourself inside the mind of EdgeVox hehe ------------------ "If I am close to the music, and you are close to the music, we are close to each other." -Bono

09-26-2001, 08:52 PM	#34
Achtung_Bebe New Yorker Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Beneath the noise, below the din Posts: 2,859 Local Time: 05:18 PM	I thought it was time I brought the rawest thread back to the top EdgeVox, did you ever get my reply??? I sent it two times now, and if you still haven't, then I may need to break stuff. BTW, got anything more to write?

10-02-2001, 05:28 AM	#35
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	I bet it gives you a thrill to make me cry, You do it just to see if you can I never thought you'd turn on me I knew everyone else would...but not you You're lost to me Even if I wanted to forgive you... A slave to my self-doubt and paranoia My dedication to my flaws equaled only by my love for you Should I have seen it coming? You're lost to me I wish things were different Fuck my stubborn pride Did it matter that I got along with your family? This is so stupid....You're so stupid......I'm so fucking stupid.

10-04-2001, 03:31 AM	#36
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	I miss you I need you I question you I hate you I seethe I control you I love you I fear you I made you I touch you I cared I lied too I killed you I bleed you I breathe you I kiss you I wake you I will do I need to endure you I fuck you I think you I am you

10-06-2001, 05:14 AM	#38
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	Grind my teeth Hold my hand Cross my fingers Hope for the best I wish you only love If you find someone better Eyes in exchange for jealousy I'll never forget you I'll always be there

10-07-2001, 07:24 AM	#39
EdgeVox War Child Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Texas/Mexico Posts: 903 Local Time: 06:18 PM	it's always a joy to hear your voice voice full of regret I'm endlessly apologetic I never meant to hurt you Support is lost in the transmission Jealousy took it's place all too easily You're my pillar of faith My darling, my church I don't have God in my life You're my religion I believe in you Nothing can ever fill the hole in my heart It's only whole when you're by my side It's you and I versus the world My candle in a time of darkness The light struggling against the all too familiar blackness The only way is through you Please allow safe passage Through your good intentions I love you Is that no longer enough Like a piece of broken glass Your absence pierces my soul I mean you the best I intend only good You'll never find the foundation of my sorrow Life without you is no life at all Your optismism is contagious Like a plague only heaven-sent In dreams, we kiss eternally In life I hurt you Without your love, I'm colorblind I need you to see To see the rainbow of life at my disposition I wish you the best......I wish you fortune I hope I can still make you smile You're everything to me A bed without your presence I need you to make it sacred Our altar of hope What you touch becomes light I'd follow you and protect you All you'd need is ask.......