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Old 05-25-2001, 03:05 AM   #21
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I'd trade my eyes for circumstance
Please dawn on my lips
You trade my nightmares for anecdotes


Indifference is the enemy of passion
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this is one of your best EdgeVox, so much raw emotion is hard to capture within poetry... yet i must say you do it with ease; your words speak of a noise rarely heard with these infant ears. Thank you for opening up so much SOUL@@

...always remember, silence must be heard...

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Old 05-25-2001, 03:26 AM   #22
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Would you notice my absence
Would you feel incomplete
Is there nothing redeemable in my life
So much hurt

Spin in my grave
anonymity by trade
Soothe my fears
Drink my pain
I wish I could give in return

Let's fuck our troubles away
You know I'm good for it..



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Old 05-25-2001, 04:00 AM   #23
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nice!!!
i wish that i could write so long poems even in spanish

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Old 05-25-2001, 05:03 AM   #24
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Let's fuck our troubles away
You know I'm good for it..
{05-25-2001}.]
couln't have said it better myself, oh, wait;i thought i did... maybe it was just one of 'em things that burn the wire through the radio waves... thankz againj




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Old 05-27-2001, 07:13 AM   #25
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hey edgevox...

you are allowed to open another thread to post your stuff!

its ok, we'll let ya!!

these have all been so very honest
i love honest poetry
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Old 05-27-2001, 08:46 PM   #26
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mediocrity...if that's the case...

Through a Cell phone I hear you crying
you know I'm still trying- to get a fix on things

It's You and Me and World War Three
You know and I know how it's going to be- we'll lose out in the end

Remember when you told me everything would turn out right
I didn't know I'd have to put up such a fight- to find my way back to the middle
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I need you to overlook my cons,
Which surely outweigh the pros
I need to know that you won't let me go,
I need to know that you won't leave me for a better man,
I'll be worth it, I know I can try to make you happy,
Will good laughs ever compensate for happiness
My soul in exchange for patience, not an even trade by far,
I need you to fight on my side in this war for my selfishness

It's You and Me and World War Three,
pick a side, wherever you'll be, you'll see me,
Shooting at me, both sides lose, but you'll be free
Free from my mediocrity, maybe that was the plan all along.....


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Old 05-29-2001, 12:52 PM   #27
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I hate having to look at that first post I did....emphasizing it only makes it worse
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Old 06-13-2001, 03:11 AM   #28
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Loved you in that memory
When you tried to stay awake
Couldn't get up if I tried
Put your ears to the ground,
you'll hear me running from my troubles
I can't hold you anymore
You're lost to me, Another name in a morbid history book
Wish it was last year
Got no reason to smile at another sunrise
You'd best leave me in my selfishness
fuck I don't know
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Old 06-17-2001, 06:35 AM   #29
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You're made for my lips
You're built for my soul
The only one that could stand me
I love you
I need you
Without you I'd cut my scarlet ropes

My identity and life depend on your disposition,
A kiss to you is a formality, to me it's a necessity,
My love is an unconscious infinity....
You'll never be alone

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Old 06-17-2001, 10:12 PM   #30
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I like this one Edgevox..
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Old 08-03-2001, 05:25 AM   #31
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My spirit feels like ash
Blow me a kiss and I'll disintegrate
I'd give anything to know what you're thinking,
To know how you really feel about me,
Do you really think I'm going to pull through?
How much faith are you prepared to lose?
God I wish I'd never known you..
I was much more comfortable being miserable
I'm so fucking disillusioned with my life...
I hope it get's better...it fucking better..
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Old 08-03-2001, 09:42 AM   #32
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you have a very raw style edgevox

very open and honest..I like it
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Old 08-05-2001, 04:20 AM   #33
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Hey EdgeVox your stuff is really bare and soul searching--I'm your number one fan

Seriously I like it put this stuff together and I guess you've gotten yourself inside the mind of EdgeVox hehe

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Old 09-26-2001, 08:52 PM   #34
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I thought it was time I brought the rawest thread back to the top

EdgeVox, did you ever get my reply??? I sent it two times now, and if you still haven't, then I may need to break stuff.

BTW, got anything more to write?
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Old 10-02-2001, 05:28 AM   #35
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I bet it gives you a thrill to make me cry,
You do it just to see if you can
I never thought you'd turn on me
I knew everyone else would...but not you
You're lost to me
Even if I wanted to forgive you...
A slave to my self-doubt and paranoia
My dedication to my flaws equaled only by my love for you
Should I have seen it coming?
You're lost to me
I wish things were different
Fuck my stubborn pride
Did it matter that I got along with your family?
This is so stupid....You're so stupid......I'm so fucking stupid.

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Old 10-04-2001, 03:31 AM   #36
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I miss you
I need you
I question you
I hate you
I seethe
I control you
I love you
I fear you
I made you
I touch you
I cared
I lied too
I killed you
I bleed you
I breathe you
I kiss you
I wake you
I will do
I need to
endure you
I fuck you
I think you
I am you
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Old 10-06-2001, 04:38 AM   #37
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I miss you
I need you
I question you
I hate you
I seethe
I control you
I love you
I fear you
I made you
I touch you
I cared
I lied too
I killed you
I bleed you
I breathe you
I kiss you
I wake you
I will do
I need to
endure you
I fuck you
I think you
I am you
EdgeVox, This is very good! I knew you wouldn't let us down with another piece of your soul--please write more nonsensical bits of poetry in the future

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Old 10-06-2001, 05:14 AM   #38
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Grind my teeth
Hold my hand
Cross my fingers
Hope for the best
I wish you only love
If you find someone better
Eyes in exchange for jealousy
I'll never forget you
I'll always be there
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Old 10-07-2001, 07:24 AM   #39
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it's always a joy to hear your voice
voice full of regret
I'm endlessly apologetic
I never meant to hurt you
Support is lost in the transmission
Jealousy took it's place all too easily
You're my pillar of faith
My darling, my church
I don't have God in my life
You're my religion
I believe in you
Nothing can ever fill the hole in my heart
It's only whole when you're by my side
It's you and I versus the world
My candle in a time of darkness
The light struggling against the all too familiar blackness
The only way is through you
Please allow safe passage
Through your good intentions
I love you
Is that no longer enough
Like a piece of broken glass
Your absence pierces my soul
I mean you the best
I intend only good
You'll never find the foundation of my sorrow
Life without you is no life at all
Your optismism is contagious
Like a plague only heaven-sent
In dreams, we kiss eternally
In life I hurt you
Without your love,
I'm colorblind
I need you to see
To see the rainbow of life at my disposition
I wish you the best......I wish you fortune
I hope I can still make you smile
You're everything to me
A bed without your presence
I need you to make it sacred
Our altar of hope
What you touch becomes light
I'd follow you and protect you
All you'd need is ask.......
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Old 10-12-2001, 03:37 PM   #40
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You'll never find the foundation of my sorrow
Life without you is no life at all
Your optismism is contagious
Like a plague only heaven-sent
Wow I love this last one you posted EdgeVox. This bit right here stood out to me... I love the line "Like a plague only heaven-sent". You're a true poet!

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