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Old 07-25-2002, 10:47 AM   #1
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*Fidgets* Um...I've got a couple of poems, if anyone wishes to read them...

Here's a couple I wrote earlier this year that I'm particularly fond of:

A bright, white dot
A bright, white flash
Jagging through the dark night sky
Zigzag, zigzag
Taking a picture of a star
Which holds all my wishes on it
Right before the star disappears behind the darkened clouds

and

Shades of grey call to a heavy nightfall before
Tuesday afternoons in a field of flowers which leads to silent evenings
Where nothing is heard except for a lone cricket
Silent outside
Yet noisy inside my brain
As gorgeous music plays
And creates images in my mind
Which involves people
Doing things
Saying things
Look
I have created a new world

Thoughts? Comments?

Angela
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Old 07-25-2002, 11:26 AM   #2
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ahhhhh!! this is awesome!!

I think you're somebody after my own heart!!

two things I get from this:
Nature
Imagination

These are two of my greatest loves!

I don't know if it is what you intented but we all interpret things differently.

I see myself on some quite meadow, lying on my back, just thinking and imagining! ahhhhh!!
nice

that's very good moony
its alright if I call you moony right?
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ahhhhh!! this is awesome!!

I think you're somebody after my own heart!!

two things I get from this:
Nature
Imagination

These are two of my greatest loves!

I don't know if it is what you intented but we all interpret things differently.

I see myself on some quite meadow, lying on my back, just thinking and imagining! ahhhhh!!
nice

that's very good moony
its alright if I call you moony right?
Those are two things that I deal with in those poems-and your interpretation's as good as anyone else's out there. .

Glad you liked the poems-and I'm glad that my poems deal with two things you love. That way it means more to you.

And yeah, sure, if you want to call me moony, go right ahead. .

Thanks for the compliments. I appreciate that.

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Old 07-27-2002, 01:43 PM   #4
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Re: *Fidgets* Um...I've got a couple of poems, if anyone wishes to read them...

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Shades of grey call to a heavy nightfall before
Tuesday afternoons in a field of flowers which leads to silent evenings
Where nothing is heard except for a lone cricket
Silent outside
Yet noisy inside my brain
As gorgeous music plays
And creates images in my mind
Which involves people
Doing things
Saying things


Angela
I this one- its very.....*looking for right word* idyllic, tranquil images, relaxing.....im trying to get the right word lol

It is REALLY beautiful!!!!!!


Btw don't worry about posting your poetry here-everyone is really great

Look forward to seeing more of your poems Moon
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I this one- its very.....*looking for right word* idyllic, tranquil images, relaxing.....im trying to get the right word lol

It is REALLY beautiful!!!!!!


Btw don't worry about posting your poetry here-everyone is really great

Look forward to seeing more of your poems Moon
Thank you!

I appreciate the compliments, guys, I really do. .

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Yet noisy inside my brain


I like this because it reminds me of something I would write.
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Silent outside
Yet noisy inside my brain
As gorgeous music plays
And creates images in my mind
Which involves people
Doing things
Saying things
Look
I have created a new world


I really like this second one a lot, it reminds me of the way an overactive mind can twist reality into something entirely different. nice work!!
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