Enough

LarryMullen's POPAngel · 03-28-2002, 09:05 PM

Shut everything off
fake and electronic
cut the wires, caked underneath
my gnawed off fingernails

Like a rusty nail in a runner's shoe
a tiny baby crying in an empty house
I see my life, never moving

Never a finger to write it down
on the breathing canvas
never stop to think

The minutes are growing stale
with every halt in my brain
the end of every dream
draws its line too soon

Leaves me with a whisper
floating in my sick heart

ACROB@T · 03-31-2002, 07:33 PM

Never a finger to write it down
on the breathing canvas
never stop to think

**Sicy** · 03-31-2002, 11:16 PM

I really felt something with that one sis.

LarryMullen's POPAngel · 04-02-2002, 07:05 AM

Thanks, guys.

The Wanderer · 04-02-2002, 11:54 PM

on the breathing canvas

paint is like oxygen

zooropamanda · 04-12-2002, 12:23 AM

This reminds me of a place I was in my life a few years ago. Just as I was finishing uni, when I was about to thrown out into the real world. This is the sort of piece I was writing back then, so I can fully relate.

Never a finger to write it down
on the breathing canvas
never stop to think

I really like those lines.

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*I am a cowgirl of funk*

03-28-2002, 09:05 PM	#1
LarryMullen's POPAngel Blue Crack Distributor Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: I'll be up with the sun, I'm not coming down... Posts: 53,698 Local Time: 12:03 AM	Enough Shut everything off fake and electronic cut the wires, caked underneath my gnawed off fingernails Like a rusty nail in a runner's shoe a tiny baby crying in an empty house I see my life, never moving Never a finger to write it down on the breathing canvas never stop to think The minutes are growing stale with every halt in my brain the end of every dream draws its line too soon Leaves me with a whisper floating in my sick heart __________________

03-31-2002, 07:33 PM	#2
ACROB@T I serve MacPhisto Join Date: Feb 2001 Posts: 2,569 Local Time: 11:03 AM	Never a finger to write it down on the breathing canvas never stop to think __________________

04-12-2002, 12:23 AM	#6
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 03:03 PM	This reminds me of a place I was in my life a few years ago. Just as I was finishing uni, when I was about to thrown out into the real world. This is the sort of piece I was writing back then, so I can fully relate. Never a finger to write it down on the breathing canvas never stop to think I really like those lines. ------------------ I am a cowgirl of funk __________________

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03-31-2002, 11:16 PM	#3
Sicy Sizzlin' Sicilian Forum Administrator Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Bay Area, CA Posts: 71,093 Local Time: 10:03 PM	I really felt something with that one sis.

04-02-2002, 07:05 AM	#4
LarryMullen's POPAngel Blue Crack Distributor Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: I'll be up with the sun, I'm not coming down... Posts: 53,698 Local Time: 12:03 AM	Thanks, guys.

04-02-2002, 11:54 PM	#5
The Wanderer Kid A Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Holy Roman Empire Posts: 5,271 Local Time: 12:03 AM	on the breathing canvas paint is like oxygen