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Old 06-05-2005, 06:04 PM   #1
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Enclosed in these Barriers

Enclosed in my mind is where your beauty lies
putting the day in my night and the stars in my skies
but when your with me that all changes for the best
every word is priceless, my hearts the test
but the one i want can never be exposed
i cant see the smile because you stay enclosed
i want you to overcome these barriers of mine
break through who cares what they think its not their life
its yours and its mine but together we lay
dreaming of "what if" from night right through the day
maybe its just me caught up in my hopes
do you know i feel, actually nobody knows
but inside its real inside its strong
cant be described in any poem letter or song
but your beauty isnt enclosed behind these barriers inside
wiether i matter to you, youll always shine
if you dont shine for me then do it for yourself
your owed that much, for putting up with what u were dealt
i played a part if only a small one
back then it wasnt this strong just a bit of fun
but since the day that it might of been
that i should of done in then, i should of seen
the true beauty thats enclosed not just in my mind
but that breaks down the barriers and flys away to shine
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Old 06-05-2005, 06:48 PM   #2
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This is another one of those rare poems that I sort of don't like because it reminds me too much of a situation I'm experiencing myself.....

*sigh*


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That was beautiful! Good job
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Old 07-23-2005, 08:02 PM   #4
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wow, I wish I could write stuff like that
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Old 07-24-2005, 04:21 AM   #5
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Good work, probably the best you've done
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Old 07-24-2005, 05:11 AM   #6
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cheers guys
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Old 07-24-2005, 05:53 PM   #7
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Excelllent writing.

Wish I could write more about love.....but wizards live a strange sort of existence...it's not that we don't love it's just the worldliness that interferences with it all.

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