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Old 08-22-2003, 01:10 PM   #1
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Elastic Band

this is a poem I wrote when I had to keep slapping an elastic band on my wrist to keep myself from doing other things.

I can dye my hair
Paint my nails
Cover the bruises
Cover the pain
But the slapping sound on my wrist every night
Breaks the silence that is my life
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Old 08-22-2003, 06:11 PM   #2
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very moving...
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Old 08-22-2003, 06:56 PM   #3
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really? Thanks! lmfao, I just had to wrote thanks about 5 times, I first had capslock on. Then I spelled it wrong. Thhen I had caps lock on again. ANd I really cannt spell to save me life.

Ive never heard anyone describe my poetry as moving. thankies
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