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Old 10-13-2002, 07:05 PM   #1
 
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..bled faith tainted in its reflection
familiarity dragged into the light
shallow contemplation abandoned
..as the sun lets its soul pass away
borrowed dreams, lost to silent emotion..
faded rose that catches every lie
silent consequence lost over a velvet ocean
leaving her lips to burn his naked eye~
dying stars caressed in watered silhouette
tamed memory flowing dry..
..burnt into cracked fountains
lost under every touch, bleeding into ivy
misplaced emotion never to show ..
virgin uncertainty, unrequited hope
somewhere distant where they could never know
cradled winter scarred in engraved stars
ebony stained rain lost in her soul..
..blood shot skin muted in fire
lost words entwined in whispers
silence loose around their necks
sunlit canvas..unconcious blessing
borrowed breath, ignorance untangled
every kiss blooming inside her cancer
..a caressed echo all thats left
love tied together over a collapsed waterfall
as he rests his head upon her chest..
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Old 10-15-2002, 05:05 AM   #2
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faded rose that catches every lie
silent consequence lost over a velvet ocean
leaving her lips to burn his naked eye~
dying stars caressed in watered silhouette
tamed memory flowing dry..
those last 2 lines are killers
write me a poem i dont like for once will ya?
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