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Old 02-24-2009, 02:12 PM   #1
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The ground beneath my sole will see
Surrender fall unto it’s knees
As crumbling ground rots underfoot
the clocks clockwork will halt abrupt

She said my cry was pride not weep
The joyous shrill, earths air I breathe
And so I cry my weep once more
The haunting shrill, the silent war


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Old 02-25-2009, 08:31 AM   #2
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i really like this. awesome writing.

i think the second stanza is excellent.

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Old 03-06-2009, 11:08 AM   #3
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Sing this to the music of Feel Good Inc or Staring At The Sun and it works fucking awesome imo.
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Old 03-06-2009, 01:06 PM   #4
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