...bomb-blast lightning waltz...

[The Wanderer]

Soft colours spiral down
--
As the picture slowly melts
And drips to the floor
--
...dead ashes
The barren hills, through a young girl's lashes

I like these lines in particular... strong piece

 

[BabyGrace]

Soft colours spiral down
A flash without a sound
Time stands still
In the blink of an eye
The world whirls by

It morphs into something else
As the picture slowly melts
And drips to the floor
Quiet before it hits
The heavens are lit

Violence smashes stone
Turns warm flesh to cold bone
Life searches for a place to hide
Burning agony forces it to let go
Through flaming city, silent screams echo

Among the rubble and cold, dead ashes
The barren hills, through a young girl's lashes
As slow, red pain begins
Mothers kneel in the ghost city
A moaning plea for hopeless pity.


I find UF very inspirating...

 

[BabyGrace]

LMAO!!!

i knew inspirating wasn't a word...i think i had a cross between inspiring and inspiration...
or is it a word?...
oh man, i think i'm having problems!

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You're taking steps that make you feel dizzy
Then you get to like the way it feels...

 

[BabyGrace]

maybe inspirational?
wow, this is so bad

does this ever happen to any of you? once i couldn't remember how to spell "the"...that was 3rd grade

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You're taking steps that make you feel dizzy
Then you get to like the way it feels...

 

[BabyGrace]

ok...update on my problem...it's NOT a word

great, now you guys think i'm stupid

i do have my intelligent moments, though!!
ok, i'll be going now *hides her face in shame*