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Old 01-22-2009, 08:45 PM   #1
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awake

what keeps you awake?
a frosty milkshake?
that last piece of cake?
or is it something fake?

lay awake, why?
stare at the sky?
smelling that french fry
will that scent die?

new day, same tune
living my life on a distant Space Moon™
do you sleep so soon?
NO!, you're awake

why?
is it your bladder?
did you drink too much
and it made you sadder?
just a hunch,
get that lunch
sober up that odor

but why?
why do you drink?
for the ink?
is it your friends
is it fun
what is fun¿
what is awake¿
am i awake¿
can i sleep¿
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Old 01-23-2009, 09:44 AM   #2
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that's pretty cool.

i like your line "sober up that odor". haha that's intriguing.

this reminds me of something someone presents at a poetry slam.

good stuff.
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