a slimy toad at its most raw

[frogbat]

this was one of the first things I ever wrote (a few months back) it's had little editing or rewriting from the initial scrawl so this is me or one of my personalities at their most raw...

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I?m sorry love...
as I stumble through the dark
I stagger and fall to the floor:
the hard, cold, soothing floor
I find I want to scream release but nothing lets out
and here I lie amongst the dust and the fleas
amongst the lowest of the low
yet even they don?t seem to want to know
and if I weren?t such a coward I know that it(death) would arrive so much sooner
even if then or ever when it does come
I know that together with a sincere smile, your name shall be spelled out upon my lips
followed by ?I?m sorry Love? for I wish those to be my final words
though I doubt there?ll be anyone to hear
but then again I shouldn?t have said a word...
for now I feel like a leper without an excuse for who I am or what I?ve done
(if only I could press rewind just this one time)
but since I know that nothing will ever be the same again
and for that I apologise
but even for the way that I feel
though I know you hate it
the only words that come to mind are
?I?m sorry Love?
for it was only intended to be a sweet surrender, a sweet release
?I?m sorry Love? i cry aloud on my knees

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I don't know if the formatting came out though...

 

[Loafer]

wow, frogbat. I like this. Its not as clean as your newer stuff, but its very moving. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Alisaura]

This is great...