A quick piece of work:

[Mullen4Prez]

Blood (wrote this in about 5 mins so dont shoot me)


Theres blood on my hands
it wont wash away
I try to walk away
but the blood is everywhere
The crowd point and laugh
I try to hide my colours but my blood shows
It wont go away til I fight back
Its not what I want but its what life is all about
People shouting or dead on the street
When will it stop, When will one bullet ever be enough

 

[wizard2c]

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Hi!

Some of the best writing comes quickly........include this in the best category.
Blood shed.......when will it stop.........probably never.

carol
wizard2c

 

[ZeroDude]

Spontaneity brings great results

 

[elysithea]

I like it.

Its not what I want but its what life is all about

That's the best line, I think (eh, it's all good, lol).

 

[Sad_Girl]

you paint a very vivid picture here, create strong feelings and provoke a lot of thoughts. that's everything a poem should be!

 

[the tourist]

Writing quick and on a whim is the best way.