A couple of new submissions...

[pop_mofo]

As always, looking for any feedback.

Cheers.

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A confessional

A constant stream of admission
Is what I float down tonight
I revel in your forgiveness
Only wanting to begin again
Begin again
Begin again
I can’t seem to start
Starting is what got me here
Now we just can’t stop

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Wrap your arms around me

Wrap your arms around me
Embrace me like the sun
Treasure me as one and only
Don’t ever forget I am the one

When I look at you I think
All the lives I’ve lived & lost
They turn to sweet surrender
Gone, but at what cost??

And know that I stand beside you
Regardless of what I have done

Know this, sweet child
As you lay your head down tonight
I am the one resting in your dreams
I am the one that makes all right

 

[For Honor]

Hey, those are pretty good !
write more





Wrap your arms around me
Embrace me like the sun
Treasure me as one and only
Don’t ever forget I am the one

 

[wizard2c]

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Very good writing...pop_mofo

carol
wizard2c

 

[Bonochick]

Starting is what got me here
Now we just can’t stop

I really like those lines.

 

[lady luck]

loved it -- mademe think about the situation I'm in now!

 

[ZeroDude]

It's quite good, woah, you make me want to write