Hi Wanderer <grin>
I'm very impressed by this piece. It's experimental and fun. Even the form of your poem is almost triangular in shape, resembling an angel (albeit the cartoony icon of an angel). I also like how you stacked the words into twos and threes alternately; it's not so noticeable at first. So, the single word "Angel" at the very top maybe implies there is a hierarchy in Hollywood.
And how fluid your words are, even if they're restricted to 21. "cut" brings to mind the "cut" in film language---> "Hollywood stars" leads to---> the stars we wish upon which are---> gases that "burn"---> "melting" karma---> "glue their wings", a reference to Icarus.
I especially like "glue their wings"; turns it all into a ridiculous or embarrassing affair.
I probably read too much into it.
foray