evil v. love

[zoomerang II]

when warmth turns to cold
hearts became quite rigid
yet its easy to feel old
for the past has left you injured

evil forms a scourge
invades every cavity
dissolves all the hope
and leaves with all the vanity

it cuts you into pieces
and spins you right around
you soon forget what love is of
you?re hearing without sound

it bends you over backwards
and trips your legs below
it sucks the soul right out of you
you?re frozen beneath the snow

though decay it left behind
and hope it stole before -
love it can never define
for love is so much more

so move upon the wave
the seas they are a calling
it?s come, its here to save
love will stop you falling

 

[Angela Harlem]

excellent zoomy, so true.

Do you write much?

 

[zoomerang II]

thanks angie

no, i don't write much really - that's the first thing i've ever posted here.


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In the stillness of the evening
When the sun has had its day
I heard your voice whispering...

 

[zooropamanda]

hmmmmmm


Powerful imagery zoomer
i love the last 2 stanzas especially.

 

[scatteroflight]

Originally posted by zoomerang II:


so move upon the wave
the seas they are a calling
it?s come, its here to save
love will stop you falling

Good stuff

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Love was never a single emotion

-ACROB@T

 

[The_Sweetest_Thing]

I like it! I really do. I normally not big rhyming person, but this is very very good.