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Old 05-10-2017, 09:47 PM   #91
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(that alternate ending though)
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Old 05-15-2017, 01:00 PM   #92
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Well fuck have I got some Superthread stories
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Old 05-16-2017, 09:47 PM   #93
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I think I need to copyright the Axver bridge I've come up with fo BTBS
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Old 05-16-2017, 09:49 PM   #94
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Old 05-16-2017, 09:59 PM   #95
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I haven't refined it fully, but

I can see those Trump Towers/I know about those golden showers/All you can see is a Russian whore/As Putin looks in the door/Man peels off those dollar bills etc etc

LALALALALALAA AMERICA I WANT TO LIVE IN AMERICA

I am struggling on extending it properly but it's way more solid than I expected. I'm a hopeless writer.
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Old 05-16-2017, 10:15 PM   #96
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Old 05-16-2017, 10:23 PM   #97
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I'm trying to get an EU/England/UK part in and I just can't make the fucker rhyme properly
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Old 05-16-2017, 10:26 PM   #98
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All I came up with a few weeks ago was "this man comes up to me, his face ORANGE like a....", and then I couldn't think of how to go further with it.
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This guy comes up to me, his face orange like a spoiled pumpkin, and he's writing these cheques we know we can't cash
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You need to send it to Bono.

I think I'm already testing my bandmates' patience with my proposal to cover Exit/Bullet. And with my general inability to articulate coherently how the songs I've written are meant to go.
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I'd question my chances of getting golden showers and Russian whores to the stage, but it seems like they really think "fuck it"
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That's a sentence I never thought I'd say
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At least tore writing better sentences than Drake's lyricist
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I'd question my chances of getting golden showers and Russian whores to the stage, but it seems like they really think "fuck it"
It would probably raise fewer eyebrows than the Eeny Meeny Miny Moe snippet in Exit.
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It would probably raise fewer eyebrows than the Eeny Meeny Miny Moe snippet in Exit.
Yeah, given the character he seems to be playing it isn't a bit weird at all. Certainly not rapey.
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