Ok, I'm only new to this, be nice :-)

[bono-vox]

Nobody reads this in the "Dream out loud" forum, it sucks but heh I never do this kinda stuff.

Your words, those words are ringing in my ears,
Look through, Look through the looking glass and tell me what you see?
Your unblemished soul,
Your heart,
You wear it on your sleeve,
For everyone to see,
And your soul is nothing...
You killed it, you killed me,
Look through, look through the looking glass and tell me what you see?

 

[bonovista]

It's really nice..

And by the way, welcome to our forum!!

Always nice to see Irish people on board.

 

[edgerulz]

it is nice.

although i would change your soul is nothing to your soul is everything. just a thought.

 

[Angela Harlem]

Its lovely in a painful kind of way. Sounds like emptiness.

You should write more Bono-vox.

 

[mad1]

Hey Yo Bono-Vox, that was good, 'interesting'


did u read my suicide one?

I can put it up here for u?

 

[bono-vox]

Thank you mad1, i couldnt be bothered posting on the other forum nobody reads the poems. Oh btw one complaint about the u2 DVD, my songs arent on it...One, Angel of Harlem, Mysterious Ways, and there was another one they played at SLane but i cant remember it, im so

about that!