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Old 11-28-2001, 01:52 PM   #1
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Another poem, I like this forum best :)

Time slips away like a grain of sand upon the sea,
I don't feel it pass by,
But time without you is a burden on my soul.
My heavy heart.

I feel like I'm slowly, slowly dying,
The walls you built around me are closing in,
I'm screaming,
Still nobody hears,
it's the sound of my heart calling you,
Love, You cannot see,
It comes from inside.
My heavy heart.

I wrote this in a free class at school today, its quite bad.
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Old 11-28-2001, 01:54 PM   #2
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Well you can read this one too,

You told mr for a reason,
It lifted all those woes, opressing me,
You told me for a reason,
You gazed into my soul,
You told me for a reason,
It was love,

You told me for a reason?
My mistake.
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Old 11-29-2001, 06:32 AM   #3
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Your poems are so sad, they're filled with melancholy. Not that that's a bad thing!

I like reading your stuff.
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Old 11-29-2001, 12:25 PM   #4
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Your poems are filled with yearning...they express the soul's desire to love and be loved - and I'm not talking romance here. I'm talking the BIG love.

Nice.
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