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Old 05-23-2008, 12:27 AM   #856
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This is my favorite Tori Amos performance. She goes mad.

YouTube - Precious Things RAINN
I actually prefer this performance of Precious Things:

YouTube - Tori Amos - Precious Things
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But hey, perhaps if we're all making comics, it's a good sign for the future. It definitely needs to reach more people. My comics are just more detailed and complex versions of my U2 cartoons, but for REAL artists, it's an incredible medium, and for me, it's just a lot of fun. I mostly love writing scripts, but animating can be fun too.
So I read your comic, LemonMelon. I really liked the quirkiness. I'm not sure how I feel about the numbered dialouge though. You are really good at parody. Perhaps in your series you could do sketchs instead of a straight story or somehow incorporate those things. I really enjoyed it. To be honest though I enjoyed your U2 parodies more.
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Boomcha, bexbis.
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Do you think readers will be able to relate to people that dressed up like this?

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So I read your comic, LemonMelon. I really liked the quirkiness. I'm not sure how I feel about the numbered dialouge though. You are really good at parody. Perhaps in your series you could do sketchs instead of a straight story or somehow incorporate those things. I really enjoyed it. To be honest though I enjoyed your U2 parodies.
Perhaps I should get a job on Family Guy and bring the show back from the dead.

Glad you enjoyed it. I hate the numbered dialogue too. It's a mess, which is a shame because the dialogue is generally quite witty and the lines tend to bounce off one another, and if you can't find one of the bubbles immediately, it loses the effect.

Do you think it would make for a good television show?
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I actually prefer this performance of Precious Things:

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I love that performance too. How you ever seen her live?
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LeMel, mind if I have a look at your comic?
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Hello, Ian.
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Perhaps I should get a job on Family Guy and bring the show back from the dead.

Glad you enjoyed it. I hate the numbered dialogue too. It's a mess, which is a shame because the dialogue is generally quite witty and the lines tend to bounce off one another, and if you can't find one of the bubbles immediately, it loses the effect.

Do you think it would make for a good television show?
I think it would if you included your parities. People would love your animated parities. It would make people investigate who you were making light of. Another good thing is that when spoken your dialouge will be quicker. Some of the best comedy is fast paced. Maybe if you make your plots really insane you might be able to get on Adult Swim or something. This is a good start. I think after some more time it will come together for you. So my only suggestion is include your parodies and that will get you far.
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LeMel, mind if I have a look at your comic?
Your email, plz. I'll just copy/paste you what I sent Screwy, because I feel it's a good starting off point.
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I think it would if you included your parities. People would love your animated parities. It would make people investigate who you were making light of. Another good thing is that when spoken your dialouge will be quicker. Some of the best comedy is fast paced. Maybe if you make your plots really insane you might be able to get on Adult Swim or something. This is a good start. I think after some more time it will come together for you. So my only suggestion is include your parodies and that will get you far.
Thanks for the suggestions. I think the dialogue would feel so much quicker if you didn't have to read it, but I agree, fast, witty dialogue is the way to go for me. And parodies are always great. I'm quite proud of those fake youtube comments I came up with.
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Your email, plz. I'll just copy/paste you what I sent Screwy, because I feel it's a good starting off point.
Send me some more stuff when you feel like it. I enjoyed reading it.
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Your email, plz. I'll just copy/paste you what I sent Screwy, because I feel it's a good starting off point.
Oh uh, thayendanegea@hotmail.com

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Thanks for the suggestions. I think the dialogue would feel so much quicker if you didn't have to read it, but I agree, fast, witty dialogue is the way to go for me. And parodies are always great. I'm quite proud of those fake youtube comments I came up with.
I loved the Youtube links. Really funny stuff and true. That's the kind of parity stuff I'm talking about.
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You know what I just thought of that would be made of all kinds of SuperWin, the Three Musketeers working on a comedy show.
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