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Old 03-05-2008, 10:24 AM   #136
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Here is an original Haiku:

Hi Partygirlvox
Haiku is something I love
I also love soup
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Old 03-05-2008, 10:24 AM   #137
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poems, ahh.
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Mike writes Haikus
Just at the drop of a hat
He is a poet
Hello there Maya
Please take a look at line one
4 syllables, phail
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Old 03-05-2008, 10:25 AM   #139
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shouldnt they rhyme?
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Hello there Maya
Please take a look at line one
4 syllables, phail
Mike pay attention
I have edited that line
Now go and read it
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shouldnt they rhyme?
Haikus do not rhyme
They are more about structure
Than rhyming sequence
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Old 03-05-2008, 10:26 AM   #142
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5,7,5?
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Mike pay attention
I have edited that line
Now go and read it
I do not have time
To stare at all of your posts
Waiting for changes
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5,7,5?
Yes.

For people that write real Haiku, it's a challenge to express real emotion or thought via that constricted a pattern.....but the ones that do it well are amazing. I am an idiot, so I can only create ones that are semi-amusing.....but I do them fairly quickly, so, PGV, quantity over quality in this case.
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oh well that's too bad
maybe this will help you out
since you're so lazy


Quote:
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Mike can write Haikus
Just at the drop of a hat
He is a poet
Quote:
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Mike can write Haikus
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He is a poet
Quote:
Originally posted by unico
Mike can write Haikus
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He is a poet
Quote:
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Mike can write Haikus
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He is a poet
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Yes.

For people that write real Haiku, it's a challenge to express real emotion or thought via that constricted a pattern.....but the ones that do it well are amazing. I am an idiot, so I can only create ones that are semi-amusing.....but I do them fairly quickly, so, PGV, quantity over quality in this case.
Yours are pretty impressive. Mentioning me and soup in one poem - that requires skill, man
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Maya, the fact is
that you still phailed the first time
Azz smack time is here
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Yours are pretty impressive. Mentioning me and soup in one poem - that requires skill, man


I try.

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Maya, the fact is
that you still phailed the first time
Azz smack time is here

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