There is a smell coming from......DESCRIBE

[circa1992]

^^Other than like state testing, we don't have to write essays in exams....at least not that I can think of off-hand

^That might work...thanks

 

[Irishteen]

^ we have to write 4/5 page essays in our English exam, and we don't get to edit

< Kate is gone

 

[U2vertigofly]

^^that was a joke ©U2vertigofly 2006 but whatever and did you take gepas

 

[circa1992]

^ Nope


^^

 

[U2vertigofly]

^then be happy

 

[circa1992]

^Why?

 

[U2vertigofly]

^in my district the GEPA'S(Grade Eight Proffienciy Assesment) decide if i go to take the HSPA'S(High School Proficency Assesment) which decide if i graduate in 2010

 

[circa1992]

^

We just had two weeks of straight state testing

 

[U2vertigofly]

^that was done over in 8 hrs over the span of 4 days

 

[circa1992]

^I see...


Sounds like fun

 

[U2vertigofly]

^

 

[circa1992]

My conclusion isn't cooperting with me

I still need a transition word and a strong closing sentence

So far I have:

Marijuana should be legalized to help those in pain with chronic illnesses. It has been proven beneficial to help with various diseases and issues and it is absurd that it has not been made a law yet. The first step in making this a law is that doctors should start to prescribe medicinal cannabis to patients who they feel really need it. As of right now, seven people in the United States are receiving medicinal marijuana supplements from the U.S. Federal Government, as part of the Compassionate Investigational New Drug program. These patients have shown great improvements while using this.

 

[U2vertigofly]

^ you know your conclusion structure

 

[circa1992]

^

 

[circa1992]

 

[U2vertigofly]

^ you said you had no idea how to write your essay

 

[circa1992]

^I didn't

 

[U2vertigofly]

^are you sure?

 

[circa1992]

^Yeah...

I think I'm getting somewhere on it I'll probably post it later....I dunno

 

[Irishteen]

It looks good Sarah, I think it is fine

< Is bored

 

[U2vertigofly]

 

[circa1992]

^^Thanks But I don't think it's specific enough

^

 

[Irishteen]

^ Ahhhh ya know, I bet your teacher could decide that for you

< Starts almost every sentence with "Ahhhhhhh""Ahhhhhh well" or "Ahhhhhh ya know" especially questions

 

[U2vertigofly]

Mr.B read my paper and he said good job and now we are having a mexican party for the OMAS and he wants me to bring Elvis music

 

[Irishteen]

^ Party in school my opinion of the US school system

 

[circa1992]

^^

^You've never had a party in school?!

 

[U2vertigofly]

like i have said Mr. B rocks

 

[circa1992]

Mine expects more of me than anyone else And doesn't rock

 

[love_u2_adam]

two people added me to there msn....and they were u2 fansthis is weird!!!




hey

 

[U2vertigofly]

^^he expects a ton from us his work is very hard
^hey