i see DESCRIBE, i see Sam's Town. . .

[Irishteen]

well we have this

I think this should be the opening or closing

This is Crazy
This song will never work
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH
so Crazy
OHHHHHHH
It's Crazy


and

and this maybe part of the chorus

"i could not let you go
slipping through the cracks
slipping through the cracks" sung by Wayne

 

[U2vertigofly]

but what about:

We gonna rock down to Electric Avenue
And then we'll take it higher
Oh, we gonna rock down to Electric Avenue
And then we'll take it higher

 

[Irishteen]

^ can we do it backwards?

 

[waynetravis]

strangers in the night
two lonely people
it turned out alright
it turned out alright
strangers in the night

 

[U2vertigofly]

higher it take we'll then and
Avenue Electric to down rock gonna we, oh
higher it take we'll then and
Avenue Electric to down rock gonna we

 

[waynetravis]

brilliant

 

[Irishteen]

so how do we put this together

opening:
This is Crazy
This song will never work
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH
so Crazy
OHHHHHHH
It's Crazy

Verse 1
strangers in the night
two lonely people
it turned out alright
it turned out alright
strangers in the night

Chorus:

i could not let you go
slipping through the cracks
slipping through the cracks

^^ I was thinking of reversing it, but maybe we could use that somehow

 

[bono_212]

I was thinking the chorus could be a bridge...unless we have problems with bridges here

 

[Irishteen]

^ okay so that's the bridge

so what's the chorus?

 

[U2vertigofly]

what so we want, a
Vertigo-esque song

Mysterious Way's-eaque song

or a WIth or Without you-esque sone?

 

[Irishteen]

^ You're writing the guitar riff, and you see the first verse so you decide

 

[bono_212]

^^WOWY

 

[U2vertigofly]

^well yeah but i could easily slow it down to WOWY or speed up to vertigo

 

[waynetravis]

it needs a Love is Blindness type solo

 

[Irishteen]

Okay so WOWY style guitar riff, with a Love is Blindness solo and a slide solo, plus a possible sax and bass solo, interesting

 

[U2vertigofly]

^well i'll do that because you got the slid and i'm not trading

 

[bono_212]

a sax AND bass duet

 

[Irishteen]

< okay I'm going to bed, I expect riffs and solos by tomorrow or maybe lyrics night

 

[U2vertigofly]

^i have football so i'll be awhile, night

 

[bono_212]

night and bye

 

[Bonos_Lemon]

< I'm back

but looks like I am too late

 

[U2vertigofly]

too late for what?

 

[bono_212]

the boom of the thread lol I thought you left!

 

[Bonos_Lemon]

^^ I thought everyone had gone, but I guess I was wrong

 

[bono_212]

nah I'm still here trying to get people to talk in the emmys thread lol

 

[U2vertigofly]

^^^me? nope

 

[bono_212]

But you said you had to go to football

 

[Bonos_Lemon]

^^^ oh yeah emmys tonight, i conan

 

[U2vertigofly]

^^tomorrow morning

 

[bono_212]

aww Dick Clark