Cut through the city on a Saturday night....and DESCRIBE

[love_u2_adam]

my god damn ipod is full ive had it for a month and its full of shit...god im sooo pissed right now

 

[VertigoGal]

we have spring break in 2 wks....i have no clue when easter is, so..

sounds like a fun essay, heh. recently finished a 3 page character analysis on cpt beatty from fahrenheit 451. he's my fav character.

 

[circa1992]

^I have spring break in 3 weeks I think I dunno

 

[Lemonchick]

>

> only here for 20 minutes or so...

 

[U2vertigofly]

let me know what you guys think i had to write in hemmingways style

 

[love_u2_adam]

 

[LJT]

<*sings*

Beautiful ones
High on diesel and gasoline, psycho for drum machine
shaking their bits to the hits,
Drag acts, drug acts, suicides, in your dad¹s suits you hide
staining his name again,
Cracked up, stacked up, 22, psycho for sex and glue
lost it to Bostik, yeah,
Shaved heads, rave heads, on the pill, got too much time to kill
get into bands and gangs,
Oh, here they come, the beautiful ones, the beautiful ones
loved up, Doved up, hung around, stoned in a lonely town

 

[circa1992]

Ken...that's really good

 

[U2vertigofly]

thank you does it match hemmingway's style and was there enough foreshadowing?

 

[circa1992]

Yeah...it seemed like it to me


You're obviously getting farther along than me

 

[U2vertigofly]

my god damn ipod is full ive had it for a month and its full of shit...god im sooo pissed right now

what ipod?
^thanks you're still writing that essay i wroth that in about an hour

 

[circa1992]

^No prob...what essay I wrote? I don't start my Hemingway essay until later this week.

I have the test tomorrow, which is NOT good

 

[U2vertigofly]

tommorow i have peer editing for that

 

[circa1992]

Tomorrow I have peer editing for my marijuana paper

 

[VertigoGal]

leaving now, i'm going to go play poker with my dad and bond with him and shit.

 

[U2vertigofly]

beat him, beat him good

 

[circa1992]

^^Bye

 

[LJT]

What be this peer editing? Letting other members of the class edit your essay?

bye darlin

 

[circa1992]

^Yep...

I don't always ask other students in my class to edit them though

 

[LJT]

^Do they make suggestions or actually score whole bits of your essay out?

 

[circa1992]

^Suggestions, for the most part....you've never had to do peer editing before?


I'm so afraid that my essay didn't turn out well...I feel like it didn't

 

[LJT]

^No i've never had to edit someone else's work, we have just always left it up to teachers.

Just be confident about it, confidence in your writing can really come through (as in it really seems you know what your on about)