My Song

[Foadie]

Just thought I could share this song I wrote last night.


Unconscious

When I look up into the sky
Then I can see your face floating there
And I don?t wanna take another step
Cause I can sense you everywhere

Put a stoplight in front of my face
I?ll never go and you?ll never taste
Make it green and I?ll hide
Make it yellow and only you wish you could die

Cause I want freedom from myself
And I will try, I will try
Any word that you say I?ll defy you
Make my own laws and make them right
I just wish you were more of a guide
Time flies when I am conscious, hold tight, hold tight

I want to be alone
In shadows and moans
But you haunt me
Make me speak lies
The truth holds me hostage

Dragons spew flame and humans speak
But I?m unconscious
Except in sleep
When honesty comes out my head is the one talking
You are silent

Cause I want freedom from myself
And I will try, I will try
Any word that you say I?ll defy you
Make my own laws and make them right
I just wish you were more of a guide
Time flies when I am conscious, hold tight, hold tight

Once more by my side
A confident for life
I want my hands untied
I?m unconscious

Help?


Critique and interpetations welcome

~~Foadie~~

 

[hippy]

When you get that recorded I want to be the first to hear it!

As poetry it's wonderful, as a song I can't even imagine!

You must be Bono's soulmate!

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BONO: FOAD, Lawrence. Just FOAD. (LOL, Mona)

You can dream, so dream out loud!

Create Light, Create Unity, Create Joy, CREATE PEACE!

 

[Veranda]

Great job Foadie! I hope you get Larry to play drums on it!

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U2- The Unforgettable Fire still burns!

 

[Foadie]

Wow thanks girls! But Bono's soulmate....thats like holding hands with God! I mean.....em...

I could use critique also!

 

[OnTheEdge]

I wouldn't know how to critique. But I think it's wonderful!

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Laura
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Something to do with politics, kids, freshness, and breakthrough.
And love.

(Joan Baez)
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....what's a Bono?