Happy to go blind

[ali26]

Happy to go blind .


I don’t know the band it never happened.

2 years ago in Chicago IL.
I’m getting ready to go Dublin Ireland with my sister she says “are you ready Crystal”
Crystal; yeah I‘m ready Ruby!

At the airport; Julian says Goodbyes! to ruby his wife and crystal (sister in-law)

And hugs them
Dublin Ireland; Ruby ; “where do want to go Chris
Crystal “the Clarence”
Ruby; well you’re the famous poet. A man says “welcome to the Clarence how may I help you “Crystal ;hi I’m Crystal Santana we would like to check in.
The man I need you to sign here please.
Both; ok.
Ruby signs her name crystal take the pen and signs as well but sees blurry .
That is it for now I hope like it.

 

[youvedonewhat]

Good start.

 

[ali26]

Happy to go blind If I could.

crys A man with a cap says “it’s ok Michael I can. Take it from here “
Michael ; See you later edge the edge “what is you name “? crystal; “my name is tal wow I can‘t believe it the edge from u2 .the edge signs crystal’s name & the tine 9:55 pm for her on the gust list a few minutes later their in their room.

Got to go it’s raining very hard.

 

[ali26]

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I don’t know the band it never happened.

Chicago IL.
I’m getting ready to go Dublin Ireland with my sister she says “are you ready Crystal”
Crystal; yeah I‘m ready Ruby!

At the airport; Julian says Goodbyes! to ruby his wife and crystal (sister in-law)

And hugs them
Dublin Ireland; Ruby ; “where do want to go Chris
Crystal “the Clarence”
Ruby; well you’re the famous poet. A man says “welcome to the Clarence how may I help you “Crystal ;hi I’m Crystal Santana we would like to check in.
The man I need you to sign here please.
Both; ok.
Ruby signs her name crystal take the pen and tries signs as well. Ruby tells the man . “she can’t see.”

A man with a cap says “it’s ok Michael I can. Take it from here “
Michael ; See you later edge the edge “what is you name “? crystal; “my name is crystal wow I can‘t believe it the edge from u2 .the edge signs crystal’s name & the tine 9:55 pm for her on the gust list. Crystal says “thank you to the edge. a few minutes crystal and ruby are in their in their room crystal puts her cane by the door and settles in an and falls asleep.

 

[Gluey]

Good tweaks, can see where you've changed it a bit from the original to help the flow. Maybe you could ask a mod to fix the title for you and close & move the other two bits so there's no confusion for the readers

 

[Sicy]

I was gonna ask, what's this title supposed to say?

 

[ali26]

Happy to go blind .

 

[sue4u2]

Sounds intriguing, carry on..