Drowning Man - Chapter Seven

[Reggo]

Well, this is it, guys. The end of this sordid, bleak, depressing tale.

Summer has come and passed
The innocent can never last
Wake me up when September ends

Ring out the bells again
Like we did when spring began
Wake me up when September ends

Here comes the rain again
Falling from the stars
Drenched in my pain again
Becoming who we are

As my memory rests
But never forgets what I lost
Wake me up when September ends

Lyrics copyright Billie Joe Armstrong

Lyrics in the fic copyright U2

And now I bow out of U2 fan fic. Thank you all for reading. Sorry it wasn't a typical story.

 

[dragonfly_wolfe]

This was a heart wrencher. Compelling and very well written. Good job.

 

[edurban]

I feel like I've been deprived of something.

 

[Alisaura]

heart-wrenching is right...

 

[mysterious_jen]

OMG .



sob .




that was brilliant. thank you .

 

[Reggo]

OMG .



sob .




that was brilliant. thank you .

you're welcome.

Note: I'm planning on rewriting the ending, so er, stay tuned. This is too depressing even for me.
^^ Highlight to read.

 

[zuropa_fit]

guh






thanks, F.

 

[ali26]

guh



ray:ray:


thanks, F.

 

[Xantric]

is this the end?

 

[Pamelakellett]

Wonderful fic, though heartbreaking

Umm, can`t help feeling that there could be a sequel though............can`t leave Larry there pondering suicide

I vote for a happy sequel..............

 

[Reggo]

Well, I've decided to completely rewrite the last two chapters.

Then it's the end.

 

[ALass4Larry]

Brilliant story!!

 

[Reggo]

I have been...a complete slacker.

I have this chapter finished, I just haven't posted it. It'll be up tomorrow

 

[Reggo]

Revised chapter posted...more to come. Kind of short, though

 

[Alisaura]

I really like this re-write, Frankie! But you know that

Love the dog's point of view...

 

[zuropa_fit]

^ ditto about the dog.