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Old 10-04-2007, 07:40 PM   #1
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do I have this Spanish right???

Durante la reunión, se vivieron momentos de tensión, debido a que los indígenas recordaron promesas incumplidas de las autoridades, mientras que Fogel cuestionó a los nativos que tienen tierras y abandonaron por división.


During the meeting, there were tense moments, during which the indigenous remembered incomplete promises by the authorities and lies, that Fogel asked the natvies who had land and abandonded it in division.

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Old 10-10-2007, 07:18 PM   #2
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the last part is not so clear
i would do something like

"during the meeting, there were tense moments, due to the indigenous people remembered incomplete promises by the authorities, while Fogel questioned the natives that have land and leaved them for division"
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Old 10-13-2007, 07:32 AM   #3
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I would write something like this:

"during the meeting, there were tense moments, due to the fact that indigenous people remembered unfulfilled promises by the authorities, while Fogel questioned the natives who own land and they left in divergence"
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