You

[bicyclingfish]

You

Black
Blue
Whisper
True
I love you

Fist
Eye
Pain
Cry
I hurt you

Lust
Lost
Lives
Cost
I left you

Roam
Wander
Look
Laugh
I want you

You left, you laughed, you looked, you learned.
I went, I saw and in my soul I burned
For us, for then, for together, forever
We came, we dreampt, we left together

Dream
Do
Want
True
I love you

 

[foray]

Hi bicyclingfish, Nice conciseness!! Personally, I value that in a poem.

foray

 

[BabyGrace]

I love the way this one ends happy (or at least it seems so to me)...


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Win together today and we walk together forever.
-Fred Shero

 

[Bacchus]

Originally posted by bicyclingfish:

Dream
Do
Want
True
I love you

Priceless, one of the better ones i have had the pleasure of reading these last few days...

By the Way, it was nice to meet you, albeit for a short time outside GM place after the Concert last Friday, thanks for your peace...