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[BabyGrace]

I watch you across the room
your eyes hide my brightness
I'm trained and guided like the missile
homing in on the colour you're wearing
with quick glances and little distractions
our eyes meet
you laugh
and I'm lost
on your lips and the way
your skin creases against my fantasy
what is tomorrow?
I want to be here and now
frozen as I always am so it might
as well be permanent
the strength in your hands isn't mine
just one more time for
my hope to shatter as I
smash it against this blinding wall.

 

[zooropamanda]

such hope
then crash bang
into smithereens
*sigh*

enjoy this
and I'm lost
on your lips and the way
your skin creases against my fantasy

 

[Anthony]

Originally posted by BabyGrace:
I watch you across the room
your eyes hide my brightness
I'm trained and guided like the missile
homing in on the colour you're wearing
with quick glances and little distractions
our eyes meet
you laugh
and I'm lost
on your lips and the way
your skin creases against my fantasy
what is tomorrow?
I want to be here and now
frozen as I always am so it might
as well be permanent
the strength in your hands isn't mine
just one more time for
my hope to shatter as I
smash it against this blinding wall.

Oh God, Babygrace, I've just been through the worst nights in ages, only to wake up to this amazing poem that describes everything going on in me so well. Thank you, its painfully honest and true. Thank you.

Ant.

 

[ACROB@T]

I want to be here and now
frozen as I always am so it might
as well be permanent
the strength in your hands isn't mine

very beautiful, the ending can be brutally truthful for so many

[This message has been edited by ACROB@T (edited 04-12-2002).]

 

[The Wanderer]

fascinating, you painted such a vivid picture in my mind as I read this... wow! and we've all certainly been a player in that seen

the strength in your hands isn't mine

that could be applied to so many different things[/i]

and of course this is, well... I like this line quite a bit too

and I'm lost
on your lips

and I'm sure others have been on the other end of this scene and you just haven't realized it!!!

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this post brought to you courtesy of the New Jersey Devils 5 game winning streak...

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

our eyes meet
you laugh
and I'm lost
on your lips and the way
your skin creases against my fantasy

BG, this is a gorgeous poem. The above lines are so true in so many situations in this life.

PS-I love your new sig, lol

 

[BabyGrace]

Thanks so much to all of you. I'm just happy people can relate to what I write.
and I honestly didn't mean this poem to be as negative as it sounded, frustrated is more the way I felt. One day perhaps I'll get the guts to ask him cos I think he might feel the same way

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oh shut up! and who won last night? huh? huh???