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Old 10-09-2001, 11:45 AM   #1
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Trust. Diminished.

Speech. Questionable.

Reality. Non-existent.

Love. Scarce.

Hate. Everywhere.

Secrets. Underneath.

Honesty. Forbidden.

Frustration. Frequent.

Opposition. Hidden.

Morality. Warped.

Deception. Veiled.

Melon

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"He had lived through an age when men and women with energy and ruthlessness but without much ability or persistence excelled. And even though most of them had gone under, their ignorance had confused Roy, making him wonder whether the things he had striven to learn, and thought of as 'culture,' were irrelevant. Everything was supposed to be the same: commercials, Beethoven's late quartets, pop records, shopfronts, Freud, multi-coloured hair. Greatness, comparison, value, depth: gone, gone, gone. Anything could give some pleasure; he saw that. But not everything provided the sustenance of a deeper understanding." - Hanif Kureishi, Love in a Blue Time
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Old 10-09-2001, 11:46 AM   #2
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OMG...I just realized I copied BabyGrace's title. I didn't even see her title when I wrote this. Apologies, as I cannot change it now.

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"He had lived through an age when men and women with energy and ruthlessness but without much ability or persistence excelled. And even though most of them had gone under, their ignorance had confused Roy, making him wonder whether the things he had striven to learn, and thought of as 'culture,' were irrelevant. Everything was supposed to be the same: commercials, Beethoven's late quartets, pop records, shopfronts, Freud, multi-coloured hair. Greatness, comparison, value, depth: gone, gone, gone. Anything could give some pleasure; he saw that. But not everything provided the sustenance of a deeper understanding." - Hanif Kureishi, Love in a Blue Time
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Old 10-09-2001, 12:22 PM   #3
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Quote:
Originally posted by melon:
Trust. Diminished.

Speech. Questionable.

Reality. Non-existent.

Love. Scarce.

Hate. Everywhere.

Secrets. Underneath.

Honesty. Forbidden.

Frustration. Frequent.

Opposition. Hidden.

Morality. Warped.

Deception. Veiled.

Melon

Indeed.



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Old 10-09-2001, 05:50 PM   #4
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I like it, melon.

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Old 10-09-2001, 05:58 PM   #5
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That's my melancholy melon.

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Old 10-09-2001, 08:49 PM   #6
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I like the way you've just used words as opposed to phrases or sentences here melon. Its very powerful.

You should come write here more often.

oh and yeah, I came back here and saw 'veiled'by melon and thought "what?? I thought I posted all those pics in BabyG's thread!!" You freaked me out!!!
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Old 10-09-2001, 11:38 PM   #7
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the fragile... everything has once again been set in motion, but have been in place since the dawn of time

i don't know why you don't write more poetry melon? or maybe you do and you're just not sharing
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Old 10-10-2001, 03:13 PM   #8
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hahaha melon

like I'd care! as they say, great minds think alike

your poem is very powerful...I'm really glad to see you around here

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