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[daisybean]

Rain
Today he is gentle
and comforting
Tomorrow he may be angry
or whistful
or gone

Wind
Today she is a warm hug
a soft kiss
Yesterday she was a cruel bully
showing how mean she can be

Sun
Today I cannot see him
but I know he is forever there
Tomorrow I hear he'll let himself be known
And I will wait for it


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Daisy
Love is a temple
Love's a higher law

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[The Wanderer]

Wind
Today she is a warm hug
a soft kiss
Yesterday she was a cruel bully

I love this bit, very nicely put daisy

 

[ACROB@T]

Sun
Today I cannot see him
but I know he is forever there

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

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[BabyGrace]

Daisy this is such a pretty poem! I like the way the structure hints at the storm blowing away to let the sun shine again. It ends on such a positive note which is always beautiful...

Thanks for sharing