universal exit

[Zoomerang96]

dark morning, a hot shower
stay awake for me, dont be sour
the sleepless, grow silent
youve finally arrived, but its the days turn to be tired

wake up into a new lifetime
the new one and the previous were torn apart
its night and youve got someone else in mind
my words aren't in your heart

tommorow i am going to grow wings
and leave this life behind
you took the lead
ill follow in time
and leave this life behind

earth is nice from the outside
but if i were to trade my wings
to undo your crime
the words in your heart still wont be mine

tommorow i am going to grow wings
and leave this life behind
you took the lead
ill follow in time
and leave this life behind

 

[The Wanderer]

hey man, good to see you around, troubled words with a tragic quality...

 

[zooropamanda]

So you finally did it...

MIB is exactly right in the themes felt here. There's almost something lingering under the surface that can't be spoken.
I love the images of
wake up into a new lifetime
the new one and the previous were torn apart
its night and youve got someone else in mind
my words aren't in your heart

heart string pullers and something i think many of us understand.

Thanks for sharing and great to see you in here matey.

 

[wannabe]

earth is nice from the outside
but if i were to trade my wings
to undo your crime
the words in your heart still wont be mine

I really like those lines. Especially earth is nice from the outside.

Glad to see you submit!

 

[Bonochick]

Originally posted by wannabe:
earth is nice from the outside
but if i were to trade my wings
to undo your crime
the words in your heart still wont be mine

I really like those lines.

I agree.


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"Hallelujah, Heaven's white rose,
The doors you open...I just can't close..."

 

[z edge]

very nice

 

[ACROB@T]

wake up into a new lifetime
the new one and the previous were torn apart
its night and youve got someone else in mind
my words aren't in your heart

 

[Zoomerang96]

thank you all, for being so very kind. i have nothing else to say, so, just, you know, thanks.

*bows for their friendliness

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-deathbear

 

[Sicy]

I like it a lot bear, very nice.

 

[foray]

but its the days turn to be tired

its night and youve got someone else in mind
my words aren't in your heart

Very good!

foray

 

[BabyGrace]

bear! hey I'm so glad you came around to share.

this is beautiful but...yeah tragic is the right word..
I really loved these lines:

earth is nice from the outside
but if i were to trade my wings
to undo your crime
the words in your heart still wont be mine

welcome deathbear

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I sing beneath the shadow of your wings...

 

[Deathbear's Love Child]

Nice job pops!