Unfinished

[V Nura]

This is something I'm toying with....I like it..but it needs work and I dont' ahve time to do it and I just opened the post woindow and started typing and if I dont' post I'll lose it forever...I learned my lesson before



I was there
because of what you were
grace in the face of karma
and a mystery I could never solve
and I can feel it on my own
even when you couldn't hold your head up anymore
and you left me, left me just outside of me

next to you
the sky was never so blue
and did you know
that every country song's for you

you walked, like tomorrow would never be grey
and they still cry,cos there's nothing I could say
and then you walked off, cos nothing held you back
and nothings over, cos if I was blind i could still see
that your here and your here inside of me
and like the tide, you still run against the sea
and in your eyes, nothing was so blue
and you know
that every country song's for you
and I can let go
if I can come right back

 

[bonosloveslave]

beautiful

 

[beegee]

that was wonderful work. i loved it.

 

[ouizy]

very nice,




who do you propose your subject matter is?

esp. from the country's song lines....

 

[ACROB@T]

and you left me, left me just outside of me

 

[V Nura]

very nice,




who do you propose your subject matter is?

esp. from the country's song lines....

.....bono rips ppl off...I rip off boo


like violence..plagiarism is a viscious cycle.