Ultimate Greed

[Brandon]

I can see, I don't help the blind
I can hear, I don't help the deaf
I can walk, I don't help the crippled
I have a home, I don't help the homeless
I have Food, I don't feed the Hungry
I have heat, I don't warm the cold
I am Loved, I don't help the lonely
I have been spoiled by God
I have the ultimate greed
Its hard to live with yourself knowing this.

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Copyright Brandon T. 2001

 

[bonovista]

Wow, Brandon..
That definetly makes people think.


Very good indeed..

 

[BabyGrace]

Brandon, you're one of those people that say what they mean. I like that.

thank you for making me think even if it's painful...it's an issue we all have to deal with and the fact that you care that much is what matters.

 

[tchlowlife]

damn, brandon that is one of the best I have seen ya throw in yet! I really liked it it was so great! send it in to U2 and ya never know they might just want to make it a song for YA!!! I know to me that would be greatest compliment...
but anyways it reminds me of how i used to write poetry, and I love that style but you do so much better than I could ever imagine myself accomplishing Kudos to Ya@!!@

 

[zooropamanda]

A very wise person once told me when i wrote a poem not unlike this one, to not blame myself for the world's wrongs.

We carry too much upon our shoulders sometimes...

A great piece Brandon

 

[Brandon]

Ack uh oh

 

[IvanClaytonJnr]

SOUL-BROTHER