The World is a Dream

[Mullen4Prez]

The World is a Dream

We shall take it tonight
No more lies or good byes
Its time we realize that
The sky is our limit

And the choice can be made within the minute
We need each other,
Closer together
Than anyone can dream

It does not seem so real now
That we have the choice
The dream
Come on, Come On,

Its on the table
Come on now
I’ll take your hand
And guide you because

You are my dreams
And you make it real
You say I try too hard
But you’re the one always asking

How to get inside my mind
Why you be so kind
And just leave it alone
Otherwise the dream isn’t going to work

Love me free me hear me
I know you can see
Just open up for me
And then I’ll show you me

See I said the sky is the limit
So our dreams can take us further
We don’t need anyone anymore
I’ll be with you again

I thought that meant something to you
But again You’re making me look like a fool
You’re making me beg
Don’t make me do it

You’re leaving me with no other choice
Its time I woke up and left
This World, This place you call Earth

 

[carrieluvv]

hmmm..thats very nice...
is it a poem or song or what?
do ya strum a guitar to find a melody for it?

just curious

 

[ZeroDude]

Mullen4Prez my man you are getting better in every sense

Its on the table
Come on now
I’ll take your hand
And guide you because

You are my dreams
And you make it real
You say I try too hard
But you’re the one always asking

How to get inside my mind
Why you be so kind
And just leave it alone
Otherwise the dream isn’t going to work

Those are very well wrote imo, I picked out these verse's because I feel like this you know, it's a universal situation, complicated relationships, the demands and the thoughts are well captured here, Ireland's always been known for it's great songwriters and if you keep going, I hopefully buy your album one day if you buy mine that is

 

[Mullen4Prez]

lol if only I could sing, Maybe we could sell our songs to bands like Westlife lol

 

[ZeroDude]

lol if only I could sing, Maybe we could sell our songs to bands like Westlife lol

Could Bob Dylan sing? plus lyrically when has a Westlife song been good? Your deliverary of the song is more important than your actually singing ability

 

[Mullen4Prez]

^ Thanks lets form a band

 

[ZeroDude]

^ your in Cork man, I'm in Belfast btw, I'd keep that in mind though, I 'm leaving my house next year I turn 18, until then I'm doing a couple of singer songwriter nights in some bars et al up here, it's good craic though

 

[Mullen4Prez]

^ ah cool didn't know you lived in Ireland, I am 17 aswell. maybe someday we'll form a band lol

 

[ZeroDude]

Maybe man I wouldn't get the hopes up but it's possible, if we're ever both in Dublin, a band may be formed lol

 

[Mullen4Prez]

^ maybe

 

[ZeroDude]

^
We'll keep it in mind and share lyrical brilliance here

 

[~BrightestStar~]