thats all

[Scarlet Lady]

And through the tinted lense
an angel wing,
apon the table top
a coffee ring

lipstick stain
ruby red
grips to the rim
of a cigarette

outside the window
more rain
inside the shelters
dreamin again

 

[For Honor]

paints an intriguing picture

 

[youtooellen]

wow that's great writing

you used such few words and drew an amazing image/story in my mind.

 

[wizard2c]

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Good writing.
I agree.... imagery can be created with but a single word.

carol
wizard2c

 

[Scarlet Lady]

thanks

 

[UberBeaver]

I like it.