Sunset ..a poem by Sydney age 8

[diamond]

Sunset

I see a blazing sunset with orange and red.

It makes the world rumble and
everything a tumble.

And fire comes up and everything burns
and we're in a bundle.

And everything turns and turns and ashes
fly up into the sky

and we're waving good bye
coming back year after year


and that's the end
right here.

Sydney Schroeder.

 

[BAW]

Very nice work Miss Sydney Schroeder

I saw my first Arizona sunset last night and indeed it was pretty enough to inspire a poem

 

[diamond]

thanks
maybe we could meet sometime?

Syd.

 

[BAW]

I would love to meet you Syd..and your sister too

but can you leave your Dad at home?

 

[Bonochick]

I would love to meet you Syd..and your sister too

but can you leave your Dad at home?

BWAAAHAAHAAAHAAAA!!!!!

 

[diamond]

I would love to meet you Syd..and your sister too

but can you leave your Dad at home?

i will keep him at home for a price..

SYd.

 

[BAW]

name your price girlie

 

[diamond]

not much..a can of soda and a snickers.

SYd.

 

[BAW]

I forgot how easy 8 year olds are!

okay, I guess you can bring hm..just make him be nice

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

LOL @ this thread.


Very nice poem, Sydney. Very pretty name, too!

 

[diamond]

LOL @ this thread.


Very nice poem, Sydney. Very pretty name, too!

thank u Ms APriL. i appreciate the compliment
sorry it took me so long to get bacK to yoU.
I only come to my Dads condo on weekends.
My Mom doesnt talk about U2 at her house

SyD.

 

[BAW]

Hi Sydney

So if I give you 2 snickers bars and a can of soda, will you tell me some more funny things about your dad?

 

[cell]

hehe...

 

[diamond]

he dosent like bugs at all and squirms if we sneek em in the house

 

[BAW]

your dad is a girlie man

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

Char, you're terrible....

 

[diamond]

sometimes at traffic lites my sissy and i catch daddy picking his boogies.
SYd.

 

[BAW]

stinky feet, really stinky , afraid of bugs and picks his nose...I feel really sorry for you and your sister...poor little girls

now tell your dad to give you your 2 snickers and a soda and I'll pay him back later...maybe

 

[diamond]

 

[cell]

lol!

 

[diamond]

oh!
i almst forgot!

did i ever tell yuo guys that my daddy thinks that he is BOno.?

like he trys to sing like him in his JEep.

it is so stoopid and embarasSing.
man i swear.

shhh.
dont tell him i wrote this.
shhh.

ok bye-
SYd.

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

 

[diamond]

onCe my dad was sucH a dork he ran out of gas in his JeeP while in the drOp off line in fronT oF my sKool.
traffiC was all tiEd up for a LonG time..
i was sOoo embaRassed...in fronT of all of my friends..

 

[Stories for Boys]

hi sydney

i really like your poem!

 

[diamond]

hi sydney

i really like your poem!

mRs.
storys,
thanks for yoUr compliment.

SYd.

 

[~LadyLemon~]

Nice poem Syd!

 

[diamond]

tahnKs.

Syd.

 

[Stories for Boys]

aren't you up sort of late?

 

[BAW]

It is a little late to be on the computer on a school night isn't it Syd?



someone should have a talk with your dad

 

[diamond]

somEtimes i sneek.

shh.

SYd.