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lazarus

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me in a minor key...thanks Ray Bradbury...


SOMETHING WICKER

unwax the obstructed ear,
hear the crackle of cabriolet
whipsnaps and hooftaps;
the drunk exhalations of carnival organ
a prayer piano for the pressured temples
of the godhead aches;
rope-tricked snakes
and firekiss takes
the breath of the world
then sighs away,
ashes on the lashes
of pretty-row maids

always in place the funhouse filter;
every face a hall of mirrors
reflecting the ripple of nature's nipple,
elongating lattitude's limbs;
every choice a ball-tossing,
gun-squirting game,
dead eyes on each stuffed prize;
no weight in the guessing
or fortune confessing,
but a pre-dawn caravan exodus,
backroad bound for a turnoff town
to hang up the tinseled bones
and roll out the tumbleweed souls.


laz
 
Great metaphors and very verbose, the second stanza is amazingly well presented, using the funfair as a metaphorical tool and premise for imo nearly all of lifes choices and in some cases misgivings is a stroke of genius:wink:
 
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