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I've been working up my courage for ages now to post a few of my attempts here, so if you have a few minutes to spare, please do have a read and tell me what you think. Thanks.
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THISTLES

If you could bend the light
towards this bloody thistle,
I would believe.

If you embraced the thistle
with your blinding shell, and
twist its jagged edges into
a cunning curl.
If you swallow the poison
from its terrible tongue, and
crucify yourself again on
its thorny crown.

If you could
I would
Believe.


CHOCOLATE CHARM

The woman had an
unrequited gaze about her,
she smiled with a warm
light that could've been
trapped in a heart of mirros,
as she fed chocolate to his
indifferent mouth.

The man had an
unrequited gaze about him,
he looked the other way
with an indifferent mask of
affection that could've been buried
in the tomb of mirrors,
as she fed chocolate to his
indifferent mouth.

She kept feeding him until
the mirrors cracked.


UNREQUITED

The mind is an instrument of pain,
echoing your touch
that burned against my skin:
echoing your words across
the corridors of
Past times and buried moments; enough to-

-twist a memory to a tortured instant,
Simply burning for your touch.

What an empty darkness
envelopes the heart's fire,
What memories turn wishes into
Pain's pleasure.

Unrequited-
Is what we could've had
And will never have.


THE FLIGHT

The light flutter of wings
in the sheets of the Night,
like hand ripples across a
Forbidden landscape;
see the butterfly soar.

Twist in the cocoon
and writhe in the heat,
the flight of the butterfly
wrrupts like an explosion
in the night;
clenched fists and wrought
wrists won't contain it.

The mountains are moving
across the Forbidden landscape,
as they follow his flight;

See the butterfly soar!


WHEN MAN LOSES FAITH

Oh Protagoras!
How your words ring true,
when my blood touched the stone
away did my doubt flew.

There are 91 steps on each
face,
on the pseudo-pyramid that is square-
based;
each step containing a layer of the
Maya's fire,
of the wisdom and the knowledge
that I admire.

In a garden of geometric poetry and lavish art,
the faith in Chac's mercy and Kukulkan's heart,
inspired the highest grace of your kingdom's divinity
never forgetting Time's infinity.

Yet, why did Ahalpu and Ahalgana
did their nature manifest,
and destruction and chaos strike
a knife in your breast?

How high were your monuments, your pride how tall?
And yet how tragic was your greatest fall?

As tragic as the most depressing tale by Euripedes,
or so it seems,
as seen when the device of deus ex machina coarsed through
his dreams.
When deus ex machina destoyed your faith;
your temples crumbled, beauty whithered
and verse destroyed,
you lost the meaning behind the complexity
of the canamyte's pattern.
When Euripedes' ink described Gods turning into destoyers of faith.
When a man's meat became his own poison;
Euripedes fell in Protagoras' shadow.

Truly, Itzaes of the Soul,
Man is the measure of all things.


LOSING MY OWN FAITH

Oh treacherous sand-storms;
take away my mind, blow away the
impurities polluting in parasitical existence,
yet never pound away my fiath
through tempests of erosion.

Tear my wretched vessel of flesh apart,
set it on fire, twist my veins
and break my fragile heart,
yet let my faith stay intact.

If I would lose my faith
the sun would never rise,
the heat would only stay during winter,
my eyes would never see the light of day;
Nor the gleem of bliss in another
person's eye.

With my own faith,
let me live.


SEEING YOU

Before
seeing you, My eyes anticipates the sign
of your face in the horizon of the
mundane; Inspired by the promise of
Requitement.

After
seeing you, There is a sudden emptiness,
buried in the depth of my mind,
which comes because we've departed to our own
Separate Ways.

After the Before,
and Before the After;
there is only seeing.


LOOKING FOR SOMETHING

Everybodys looking for something.
From answers to questions
About our identity,
Fidelity,
Existence and
Depth,
To the truth behind
False religion.

Second rate dramatists
Posing as the monarchy,
Toe-suckers and hand kissers
Search for new flesh
In politics' rabbit hole,
Everybody wants completion
And hopes of finding it through
obsessions with the senses,
Penetrating bodies,
Drowning in alcohol,
Blasting nerves,
Shooting acid through bones and organs,
And contaminating through
Eternal attraction to valued paper.

Yet no one finds completion.

Everybody's looking for something,
Except that everybody knows not what.

[This message has been edited by Anthony (edited 04-07-2002).]
 
If you could bend the light
towards this bloody thistle,
I would believe

What an empty darkness
envelopes the heart's fire,
What memories turn wishes into
Pain's pleasure

Twist in the cocoon
and writhe in the heat,
the flight of the butterfly
errupts like an explosion
in the night

The mountains are moving
across the Forbidden landscape,
as they follow his flight

In a garden of geometric poetry and lavish art,
the faith in Chac's mercy and Kukulkan's heart,
inspired the highest grace of your kingdom's divinity
never forgetting Time's infinity

Tear my wretched vessel of flesh apart,
set it on fire, twist my veins
and break my fragile heart,
yet let my faith stay intact

Search for new flesh
In politics' rabbit hole,
Everybody wants completion
And hopes of finding it through


great stuff anthony, really like the style and variety in each one..Losing My Faith and Thistles especially stood out for me..look forward to more
 
Yeh- that was lovely Ant- I enjoyed reading them especially Thistles!

If you embraced the thistle
with your blinding shell, and
twist its jagged edges into
a cunning curl.
If you swallow the poison
from its terrible tongue, and
crucify yourself again on
its thorny crown.
 
I love your style, Anthony, it's so honest. Seeing You is such a clever poem, I love that one. Thistles and Losing My Own Faith were two of my faves, and the last one especially hit me hard. These lines are brilliant:

If I would lose my faith
the sun would never rise,
the heat would only stay during winter,
my eyes would never see the light of day;
Nor the gleem of bliss in another
person's eye.

With my own faith,
let me live.


oh I just reread The Flight again and now I am totally loving that one. It's going to take me awhile to digest all of these, but I can guarantee I will be coming back to read them again.
thanks for sharing, and there's no reason to be afraid, I promise
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I sing beneath the shadow of your wings...
 
Thanks all, thanks a lot. I really appreciate it, I'll be terrorising the forum in a little while.

Ant.
 
I have read the first four and want to concentrate on the rest at another time.

Unrequited..wonderful. I understand a lot of those words.

My favourite was The Flight. You wrote it with that feeling of soaring as the butterfly was. I really enjoyed reading this one.
 
It took me this long to respond cos I had to digest a lot of it. My immediate favourite is 'Seeing You'. It's so simple, effective and clever. It shares the same format as 'Chocolate Charm' in that their forms are the same and they're both like riddles.

Thistle.
If you embraced the thistle
with your blinding shell, and
twist its jagged edges into
a cunning curl.

"Cunning curl" does it for me. It is a very small detail but branches out to a whole lot of meanings, in my opinion. Like how Jesus Christ turned a crown of thorns into a crown of light; how yes 'cunning' it was of him. And the word cunning, not often associated with Jesus but gives me the image of a playful intelligent person... Jesus could've have been like that. A cunning good man, that's an oxymoron if there ever was one. I don't know if you intended these meanings. Sometimes I read too much into things.

'Unrequited'.
The mind is an instrument of pain,
echoing your touch
that burned against my skin:
echoing your words across
the corridors

What an empty darkness
envelopes the heart's fire,
What memories turn wishes into
Pain's pleasure.


I can relate very very well to this.

'The Flight'.
It can be interpreted as very sexual, too. The light flutter of wings in the sheets of the Night is like lovers liberating themselves underneath the bedsheets. Perhaps I'm stretching it, but "forbidden landscape" and "writhe in the heat" offers a clue.

The rest I'll have to contemplate later
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foray
 
Originally posted by foray:
'The Flight'.
It can be interpreted as very sexual, too. The light flutter of wings in the sheets of the Night is like lovers liberating themselves underneath the bedsheets. Perhaps I'm stretching it, but "forbidden landscape" and "writhe in the heat" offers a clue.

Yes, foray, yes! It IS meant to be read in a sexual context, I didn't know how obvious it was to people, but I'm so glad you picked up on it. Its very much about a forbidden sexual encounter, that practically screams out warning for danger in the near future, but the participants can hardly help themselves. No one can contain the 'explosion', as it were. Now that you read the sexual meaning in it, you can read quite a few other things, as well.
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As for THISTLES, I could hardly believe it, you seem to have tuned into the poem really well; you read it as I wrote it. The 'cunning curl' was meant to be ambiguous enough for such Jesus interpretations, because at the end of the day, the poem is about Jesus my faith in him; however, I am just a mere thistle in his light.

Ant.
Ant.
 
Originally posted by Anthony:
Now that you read the sexual meaning in it, you can read quite a few other things, as well.
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Ooh yes. Now that you've confirmed it, it's a very graphic poem indeed
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<grin>

foray
 
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