Some Kind Of Nothing

[namkcuR]

feel the weight of the world on me
even though I have no responsibilities
don't feel like talking, don't feel like thinking
life is going alright but it's not enough
I'm on solid ground but I feel like I'm sinking

I don't know, I can't explain
this funk that's overtaken me
it's just some kind of...
malfunction of my soul
it's just some kind of...

laying almost silent in the dark
wondering why I am up so late at night
don't feel like moving, don't feel like sleeping
I'm an intelligent guy, but sometimes I feel
like I just don't have a thought worth keeping

I don't know, I can't explain
this funk that's overtaken me
it's just some kind of...
malfunction of my soul
it's just some kind of...

I'm not happy, I'm not sad
I'm not angry, I'm not mad
I'm not depressed, not even numb
no, that would be something
this is nothing

it's just some kind of...
malfunction of my soul
it's just some kind of...

 

[ZeroDude]

"this funk that's overtaken me"

I think it's good except this line riles me up the wrong way but then again again I'm listened to I Am The Walrus

 

[For Honor]

Hey, you're posts hear remind me a lot of me.......
I've had that feeling......


"it's just some kind of........"
yeah, and I never know how to finish that sentance....



I like the opening, um..... stanza..... or whatever you would call it.
That sort of set the pace, and I instantly knew what you were talking about.

This one made sense to me, even though it is straighforward.
(read that sentance a few times, and consider the differnt meanings...... lol)

I don't know, maybe I sensed some sort of honesty or something there (in your writing)......