Silent whispers upon a moonlit sky

[zooropamanda]

Silent whispers upon a moonlit sky
crispness of white sheet wrapped around my skin
a paradisal,dainty giggle
as you tickle my heart
sparkling, spirited eyes whirling across the sky
your touch so tender and calm
like the ebb of the crystal tides

capricious thoughts we have
look upon the morn with a sunken eye
be hushed beneath that moon
serenity of rhythm taking my breath
frozen blissful moments
cradling a song
perfectly entwined
your caress evermore with mine
as the lustre of the moon touches our glow...

Amanda

 

[apoed]

I like it... very romantic. Wish I could write something that sentimental - I seem to have a mental block with that sort of thing. I once tried to write a love poem for my girlfriend and it came off sounding like a Dr. Seuss rhyme.

She liked it anyway, though...

[This message has been edited by apoed (edited 02-09-2001).]

 

[BabyGrace]

that's very pretty zoomanda

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Everyone argues, then we do what I say.
-Bono

 

[frogbat]

need i comment?

 

[zooropamanda]

hmmm..meaning?

I wrote it listening to this When I look at the World instrumental (which I dont believe is actually that). Its such beautiful music..

apoed, i usually can't write them either. inspiration is a good thing. Thanks guys

 

[Alisaura]

That is beautiful...

And BabyG, I love your sig...

 

[popkidu2]

Originally posted by zooropamanda:


capricious thoughts we have
look upon the morn with a sunken eye
be hushed beneath that moon
serenity of rhythm taking my breath
frozen blissful moments
cradling a song
perfectly entwined
your caress evermore with mine
as the lustre of the moon touches our glow...

Amanda

awww, geez, dangnabit......

ZA, I'm gonna say this only once, and don't take it the wrong way.

You're the most sentimental, precious poet, I've ever read. You make me smile, which these days, is saying a lot.

Thanks for the smiles, and making me believe.....

 

[zooropamanda]

Oh my goodness!
Dont tell me! Popkid I always knew deep down you were just Mr Romantic

That's why you've been the hurt the way you seem to have. Sorry, if I overstepped the line there. No one will read it here in our corner, Im sure.

Thanks for the compliments, you make me blush.Too kind.