Running

[flaming car]

Running

I am a man
standing
watching
dreaming
running

I look for you
faces
crowds
windows
myself

I want this
last
live
linger
love

I am you
child
lover
friend
reflection

I am a man
waiting
wanting
dreaming
running

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daddy's your comfort and he's your best friend, daddy'll hold your hand right up to the end... daddy just won't say goodbye.

 

[BabyGrace]

I am a man...
I look for you...
I want this...
I am you...
I am a man...
running

wonderful piece
I love poems with rhythm and i love the ones that say so much so eloquently with so few words
interpretation is the fun part and this one can mean so much
thanks for sharing

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but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

 

[hermes]

simple and really effective

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Steve
SAME OLD STORY- Hardcore American Comedy

 

[ultraviolet299]

I like it too