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Old 09-15-2000, 12:00 AM   #1
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"Rain" . . . let's play finish the poem

“Rain”

Delicate rain
Licks your skin
And kisses the pain
As the raindrops spin
A dripping stain
Downward and in
Empty lips remain
Enraptured with sin

The Rain whispers
And pours its heart out
Like the Bronte sisters
In the shadows of doubt
Friendly rains soothe Time’s blisters
And thirst upon the arid drought
A blinking eye of the Sun flitters
And reigns over ?

-for Cate

It needs one more word . . .
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Old 09-15-2000, 01:15 AM   #2
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im sorry, couldnt help it :P

Ill come back with something better

p.s. I wonder who this is about? And maybe I wont tell you that I saw a pic of here today with her head shaved.
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Old 09-15-2000, 06:44 AM   #3
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you liar!!!!!

(I know, gout works too)
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Old 09-17-2000, 10:32 AM   #4
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What a beautiful poem!
How about:
"the heart devout" ??
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Old 09-17-2000, 11:28 AM   #5
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just what I was looking for, thanks U2wannabe!!!
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Old 09-18-2000, 06:32 AM   #6
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You're so welcome, Wanderer!!
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