One

[The Wanderer]

it was like
all the mindless moments
vanished
hidden
burried in your mind
and you were one...

and then you were one
and you still dream
you just don't ever wake up
ever
again

 

[zooropamanda]

we get to carry each other

 

[silver_afterglow]

but we're not the same

 

[Bacchus]

Can you hear me calling love,
Can you hear me call,
Hear the scratching,
won't you let me crawl?

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i blame myself for being too much like somebody else, never thought i would just bend this way
then a phone call made me realize i'm wrong...
---4am---

 

[BabyGrace]

now its my turn

I just want to smile

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Just the bang and the clatter
As an angel runs to ground...

 

[travu2]

This poem reminds me of the Edge's "less is more" style of playing the guitar. I really like the way you use each line, especially starting the second stanza with "and then you were one." There is such a strong sense of no going back.. something you can never put your finger on, but it's familiar. I had to read this poem over and over because it made me a little uncomfortable (which is a good thing).

 

[Alisaura]

Yeah...