'nuff of the toys, on with the er...

[frogbat]

Oh my sun setting low
Oh my burning god please don?t go
Where is it you?re from

Oh my love don?t look
Oh my singing sweetheart I shook
Why do you do this to me

Of all the fun we had
Of all the joy we once knew
What?s left now but the shallowest of graves

Let the fish in the rivers swim fast
Allow them to reach the depths
Let the birds fly up
Let them soar into the heights
Let them be the fireworks
Tonight
The Sun is no more
Nor Are you
I live beneath the silver light
Won?t you stay a while

Let the beasts roam as they wish
Let them fill the streets
Never let the flower be torn
Or the tree uprooted
Never let love be looted
Or hate be diluted
Tonight
We were never
But they were
And she could cover the world with her finger
And upturn my heart?s corner
I just chose to burn her

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just reread it - boy it's crap, lost the plot as usual


[This message has been edited by frogbat (edited 01-26-2001).]

 

[zooropamanda]

I don't think you lost the plt, I thought it ended rather nicely, if not painfully.

"And she could cover the world with her finger
And upturn my heart?s corner
I just chose to burn her"

Good lines, matey.

 

[The Wanderer]

crap??? no sir, very real, very emotional

And she could cover the world with her finger
And upturn my heart?s corner
I just chose to burn her

some of my favourite lines...

 

[BabyGrace]

frogbat...that is not crap and I really enjoyed rereading it

I think the ending is beautiful...you lost nothing

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I think Edge is the head of the band, I'm the heart, and Adam and Larry are the feet.
-Bono