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Old 01-13-2001, 10:27 PM   #1
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nameless poem thing

Green tile floor scrubbed sparkling clean
Slick as dew, in its glare I see you
Staring down at me
Behind my back, a wraith on my shoulder
Is it clean enough for you?
Canít you see yourself as well as you see me?
Your still form, watching, looking, evaluating, measuring
Never revealing
What I leave bare for the world to see
And so I scrub and I sweep and try to please
But Iíll never know just how you feel
And youíll know everything there is to know
about me.

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Old 01-14-2001, 04:20 AM   #2
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hey Loafer, s'been a while

very interesting metaphor and imagery
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Old 01-14-2001, 04:56 PM   #3
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Very nice, loafer. I like this a lot.



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Nichelle
**Still looking for the
face I had before the
world was made....**

**Work like you don't
need money, love like
you've never been hurt,
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