my little poem: entitled Tough

[uwwedoogie]

its tough to live the way I do,
to have live my life without you,
is it something i've done,
or something i've said,
or are these going to my head,
i do everything I can...so why won't you accept me,
if i've wronged you...why don't you correct me...
its ben too long to turn away,
to leave it for another day,
i'll do everything you want,
and give you anything you need,
not loving you is not being able to breath,
i need you now more than ever,
my feelings won't change not like the weather,
because its tough enough not loving you,
without having to live my life the way i do.

im just bored, what do you all think?

 

[Sicy]

I think its in the wrong forum

 

[Doozer61]