My Journey

[cathou_u2]

Another poem, written back when
Definitively need to sit down with paper & pencil soon

My Journey

I've sent my soul upon a journey
The day of its return still unsure
Withdrawing doubts and wonders
Visiting unbelievable places
Worshipped only by joy

I've sent my soul upon a journey
Somewhere, faraway out of sight
Believing leading the way
On a grassy road in wooden lands
Reaching slowly the sea

I've sent my soul upon a journey
Anytime across the water
It may long to leave soon
No rush needed, time will come around
Stars colliding in the sky

I've sent my soul upon a journey
It waved me goodbye a long time ago
Before I even knew myself
Walking at its own pace
It may lead to you

I've sent my soul upon a journey
Of many goals yet unclear
Following my only heart
Little soul faraway, but close to mind
Reaching her arms across the ocean...


What do you think?!

 

[Moonlit_Angel]

It sounds like it'd make for a great song. Perhaps a lyrical one from olden times, or something. Has a very bright, peaceful, hopeful tone to it, but it's a sincere kind of happiness and optimism. I picture a beach somewhere, with a vast ocean, and a sunset. Pretty .

Angela

 

[LoveandLogic]

This one is my favorite! And I can't exactly explain why. Which is a sign that it's absolutely fantastic! Damn, I love poetry!

 

[Casamares]

Another poem, written back when
Definitively need to sit down with paper & pencil soon

My Journey

I've sent my soul upon a journey
The day of its return still unsure
Withdrawing doubts and wonders
Visiting unbelievable places
Worshipped only by joy

I've sent my soul upon a journey
Somewhere, faraway out of sight
Believing leading the way
On a grassy road in wooden lands
Reaching slowly the sea

I've sent my soul upon a journey
Anytime across the water
It may long to leave soon
No rush needed, time will come around
Stars colliding in the sky

I've sent my soul upon a journey
It waved me goodbye a long time ago
Before I even knew myself
Walking at its own pace
It may lead to you

I've sent my soul upon a journey
Of many goals yet unclear
Following my only heart
Little soul faraway, but close to mind
Reaching her arms across the ocean...


What do you think?!

Awesome

You painted a calmative picture here (just my feelings ).
And I agree, it should be lyrics for a song, it's a very melodic work.

 

[cathou_u2]

Girls you've made my week!!! ......who cares if I'm assured that I've failed my stats exam tonight

Wow, it could be a song!
See, that's why it is sometimes extremely useful to share one's thoughts with others, they give you an insight, an edge you've completely missed!

I'm at lost for words really, I LOVE poetry and I've been writing since I was 11 or something, about boys with blond hair like corn, back then

THANK YOU!!

 

[Casamares]

about boys with blond hair like corn, back then

So you must have had a lot of fun with that
I used to write poetry when I was about 11-15 Then I certified it's not really my cup of tea and turned to prose.
But I still enjoy reading great poems
Have you got some favourite poets?

 

[cathou_u2]

So you must have had a lot of fun with that
I used to write poetry when I was about 11-15 Then I certified it's not really my cup of tea and turned to prose.
But I still enjoy reading great poems
Have you got some favourite poets?

You don't have to pretend like "blond" and "corn" can be called "poetry" But I guess, we all have to start somewhere!

Prose is wonderful too, well, pretty much ANY type of writing, I like!
As for my favourite poets, well, the list always change, but most definitively: Emily Dickinson, Rainer Maria Rilke, Shakespeare, John Keats, Lord Byron... and I want to start W. B. Yeats before going to Ireland

 

[Casamares]

You don't have to pretend like "blond" and "corn" can be called "poetry" But I guess, we all have to start somewhere!

Prose is wonderful too, well, pretty much ANY type of writing, I like!
As for my favourite poets, well, the list always change, but most definitively: Emily Dickinson, Rainer Maria Rilke, Shakespeare, John Keats, Lord Byron... and I want to start W. B. Yeats before going to Ireland

If we're talking about Ireland and poetry, I can recommend you Celtic Prayers - wonderful poems They show the athmosphere of medieval Britain The sea, people... Brilliant

I read the biography of G.G. Byron, what a man! He was a bigger scandalist than famous 21st-century celebrities And from his name comes my email address

 

[cathou_u2]

If we're talking about Ireland and poetry, I can recommend you Celtic Prayers - wonderful poems They show the athmosphere of medieval Britain The sea, people... Brilliant

I'd be interested!
Pm me or leave me a comment with some names/titles!

 

[Casamares]

I'd be interested!
Pm me or leave me a comment with some names/titles!

I must check titles out and I'll send you

 

[cathou_u2]

I must check titles out and I'll send you

Perfect!